chasing the death ☼
i am a bit nasty and my posts are all emo ☂ ☂I was freaking eighteen years old already and I don't even know why I cried at the God-knows-how-many-times I've re-read Harry Potter and The Deathly Hallows. I just finished it a minute ago, and here I am, in my dormitory room --oh, yes, a dormitory-- with puffy eyes and silently weeping because my roommate is still awake.
The thing with children book --is Harry Potters series considered as a children book? I thought it was, but the seventh one? Let's just assume that it was too-- I repeat, the thing with children book is, as you grow older, you have seen much more thing than your younger self, and all the problem in the book; the thing, the facts, the inside jokes, the nasty language; you realize that the book is somewhat left you a message, a deep message that maybe the children can not even decipher.
This freaking book, the very last book from Harry Potter series, had taught children how to not behave badly to get what they want. To love people well. To fight the bad side. To fight for the weak.
But then, did the children actually know and understand about the sacrifices, the dark fear that almost everyone had, the secret behind Hermione's fear of being spelled and all of potterhead theories, the true love in loving someone, all the pride, all the hate, all the joy, how Narcissa protect Harry just for seeing her Draco, the marauder's lively friendship, all the mischief, Sirius's twelve years of waiting, how Ron's fury to Harry on the fourth book, all the pain of Snape hiding his love for Lily, all the shame Slughorn held in his head, all of Fudge's fear for Voldemort, all of Voldemort weaknesses...
And don't forget that bitch Umbridge; even we can forgive Snape and the Malfoys, but not Umbridge.
What I mean is, this freaking children book is amazing. Go search Harry Potter text post on tumblr and you will find dozen text about people scrumming down Harry Potter facts and connecting it with actual science; psychology theories and logical thinking about why this character did this, why was this happening, why wasn't that instead --and even though it is part of the fandom's guess, it is still true, and we can actually relate it to the book. That is why this series is amazing --no, that is why literary work is amazing.
Go read this series for the last time, if you want to. I think if we re-read it with different knowledge of the world, we might get the actual meaning of the writer's intention, not mentioning the deep ones. And maybe that is why we always here in the fandom, until the very last time, because we love this book so much, and also the characters, and the story, and of course the world inside it.
And remember your answer if people ask you if you are still re-reading this book after all this time,
"Always."
The thing with children book --is Harry Potters series considered as a children book? I thought it was, but the seventh one? Let's just assume that it was too-- I repeat, the thing with children book is, as you grow older, you have seen much more thing than your younger self, and all the problem in the book; the thing, the facts, the inside jokes, the nasty language; you realize that the book is somewhat left you a message, a deep message that maybe the children can not even decipher.
This freaking book, the very last book from Harry Potter series, had taught children how to not behave badly to get what they want. To love people well. To fight the bad side. To fight for the weak.
But then, did the children actually know and understand about the sacrifices, the dark fear that almost everyone had, the secret behind Hermione's fear of being spelled and all of potterhead theories, the true love in loving someone, all the pride, all the hate, all the joy, how Narcissa protect Harry just for seeing her Draco, the marauder's lively friendship, all the mischief, Sirius's twelve years of waiting, how Ron's fury to Harry on the fourth book, all the pain of Snape hiding his love for Lily, all the shame Slughorn held in his head, all of Fudge's fear for Voldemort, all of Voldemort weaknesses...
And don't forget that bitch Umbridge; even we can forgive Snape and the Malfoys, but not Umbridge.
What I mean is, this freaking children book is amazing. Go search Harry Potter text post on tumblr and you will find dozen text about people scrumming down Harry Potter facts and connecting it with actual science; psychology theories and logical thinking about why this character did this, why was this happening, why wasn't that instead --and even though it is part of the fandom's guess, it is still true, and we can actually relate it to the book. That is why this series is amazing --no, that is why literary work is amazing.
Go read this series for the last time, if you want to. I think if we re-read it with different knowledge of the world, we might get the actual meaning of the writer's intention, not mentioning the deep ones. And maybe that is why we always here in the fandom, until the very last time, because we love this book so much, and also the characters, and the story, and of course the world inside it.
And remember your answer if people ask you if you are still re-reading this book after all this time,
"Always."
Labels: rambling, reccomendation, review
+ posted on 20161226 at 21:28
So.
My friend suddenly brought up BTS's HYYH theories and she asked me to write it, so, yeah.
Sachi, you lil shit, I still can't find the post you said before!
Actually this is not a theory. I mean, this is not the theory for the whole storyline of HYYH concept. This is about the origin of HYYH concept.
A lot of ARMYs said that Big Hit planned this concept since long time ago, some ARMYs even thought it was from No More Dream era. They found a lot of evidence, which is I can't legit post here because it's all around twitter. If you actually follow their activity through twitter, and you chat with another ARMYs around the world, I swear you must have heard about this.
In short, we assumed that Big Hit really planned this HYYH concept since Bangtan's debut.
But why?
Well, just five hours ago, my friend (who is a huge fan of Vocaloid) brought up a screen shot of Vocaloid SeeU performing live in MNET. She pointed out about Namjoon's name in the producer section of the song. It's GLAM's I Like That, and we casually chatted about GLAM disbandment and how it's affecting SeeU since Dahee is SeeU's voice bank.
Anyway, SeeU is the first Korean Languaged Vocaloid. You can search it up in Google :)
And then, she said she read my previous theory about HYYH concept (you can read it here). And she said that actually, it's SeeU's concept.
Confused? Okay.
Every vocaloid character have its concept. For example, Hatsune Miku's is 'The first sound from future' means that Miku is the first one to make changes on music industry's future. I mean, she's only a hologram that can sings, and she can gain a lot of fans by that. It's the future music, she is from the future.
You get it?
Back to SeeU,
My previous theory roughly said that the main idea of the whole HYYH concept is actually simple. It's according to us how we interpret the messages they put in there. I've read a lot of theories in tumblr and/or twitter, and every single post there have the same point: growing up.
SeeU's original concept is "Vocaloid that can create anything you want". It's kind of similar with the whole HYYH concept according to me.
SeeU can create everything, it's up to you what you want to create.
We (BTS) leave messages through this video to your youth, it's up to you how you take that in.
The only legit proof of this right now is from her first song in production: I=Fantasy.
Wait,
I know this is not enough for me to make a theory about this but then my friend said that she legit read this on a forum years ago. She strongly said that she did remember about it, about the concept of SeeU on her very first launching.
I'm still doing the reasearch to Google and a lot of Vocaloid forums to find the article she read. I hope I can find it very soon and linked the thread here.
Let's assume that the thread (about SeeU's concept) is exist, because on some point it is really make sense (with the whole thing about 'Big Hit planned HYYH concept since years ago'.
Back to SeeU,
I=Fantasy was created by Hitman Bang, the father of our lovely boys. He made the lyric.
It's seen on the lyric:
I'm a dream, a dream, I'm a dream
I=Fantasy Fantasy
I'm an open door, a door, put anything through me
Have fun with me, let me take care of you
I'm, I=Fantasy
The bold line clearly says that SeeU is a dream, SeeU is a fantasy, so it's possible for her to create anything.
And how is this connected to BTS' HYYH?
Well, as we know, Big Hit's girl group, GLAM, was disbanded after Dahee's scandal. And Dahee is SeeU's voice bank. It's simply mean that Dahee is SeeU's voice actress. Since Dahee is jailed, SeeU is now also deactivated and not sold anymore. Her website is also being taken down.
And with that, SeeU is done.
SeeU's first appearance is on 2011.
GLAM debuted in 2012.
BTS debuted in 2013.
Since SeeU is no more promising, and GLAM is too, why not giving this concept to our rookie, BTS?
This explained how Big Hit is already planned this since BTS's No More Dream era.
How if Big Hit give this concept to BTS with some changes? What if Big Hit creative team bring up this concept when Namjoon say they want to make a song about youth's shits?
Bam.
Or maybe the whole HYYH thing is not originally from Namjoon and the rest of the gang. Maybe someone in Big Hit already planned Bangtan's album line up, like the transition of School Luv Affair trilogy to Dark and Wild to HYYH.
It's all planned, I believe that. I think they didn't just sit down and casually said "Hey, what's for our next comeback?"
Actually, SeeU's concept is not that dark.
SeeU's first official debut song is titled RUN. And if you search it up on Google, the lyric is the total opposite of BTS's RUN.
By dark I mean we see a lot of suicidal thought in those M/Vs, right?
I think when they (Big Hit creative team - or whatever it called) planned BTS's album line up, they thought of SeeU's concept but then it didn't quite fit with Bangtan's hip hop theme. Plus, Namjoon and the rest said that they want to make something about youth, so, why not darkening the concept a bit?
In short, what am I trying to say here is,
This HYYH concept is legit created from long time ago, with a lot of thinking and editing. I just want to confirm it, lol, since nobody talks about this. Well, as long as I know. Everyone simply talk about 'oh my, they already planned this since God know when' but they didn't ask why or how.
But then, HYYH's general idea is great. Very great. Like what I said, the main storyline itself is a simple one. Maybe a great idea in general. But the general idea itself is the problem. It can creates an ENDLESS storyline, if we want to take a moment and seriously think about it.
But it's about one thing for sure. It's about youth, and how are we dealing with shits in our youth life.
:)
Tell me what you think! And feel free to correct me if I wrong!
also posted on my tumblr here
My friend suddenly brought up BTS's HYYH theories and she asked me to write it, so, yeah.
Sachi, you lil shit, I still can't find the post you said before!
Actually this is not a theory. I mean, this is not the theory for the whole storyline of HYYH concept. This is about the origin of HYYH concept.
A lot of ARMYs said that Big Hit planned this concept since long time ago, some ARMYs even thought it was from No More Dream era. They found a lot of evidence, which is I can't legit post here because it's all around twitter. If you actually follow their activity through twitter, and you chat with another ARMYs around the world, I swear you must have heard about this.
In short, we assumed that Big Hit really planned this HYYH concept since Bangtan's debut.
But why?
Well, just five hours ago, my friend (who is a huge fan of Vocaloid) brought up a screen shot of Vocaloid SeeU performing live in MNET. She pointed out about Namjoon's name in the producer section of the song. It's GLAM's I Like That, and we casually chatted about GLAM disbandment and how it's affecting SeeU since Dahee is SeeU's voice bank.
Anyway, SeeU is the first Korean Languaged Vocaloid. You can search it up in Google :)
And then, she said she read my previous theory about HYYH concept (you can read it here). And she said that actually, it's SeeU's concept.
Confused? Okay.
Every vocaloid character have its concept. For example, Hatsune Miku's is 'The first sound from future' means that Miku is the first one to make changes on music industry's future. I mean, she's only a hologram that can sings, and she can gain a lot of fans by that. It's the future music, she is from the future.
You get it?
Back to SeeU,
My previous theory roughly said that the main idea of the whole HYYH concept is actually simple. It's according to us how we interpret the messages they put in there. I've read a lot of theories in tumblr and/or twitter, and every single post there have the same point: growing up.
SeeU's original concept is "Vocaloid that can create anything you want". It's kind of similar with the whole HYYH concept according to me.
SeeU can create everything, it's up to you what you want to create.
We (BTS) leave messages through this video to your youth, it's up to you how you take that in.
The only legit proof of this right now is from her first song in production: I=Fantasy.
Wait,
I know this is not enough for me to make a theory about this but then my friend said that she legit read this on a forum years ago. She strongly said that she did remember about it, about the concept of SeeU on her very first launching.
I'm still doing the reasearch to Google and a lot of Vocaloid forums to find the article she read. I hope I can find it very soon and linked the thread here.
Let's assume that the thread (about SeeU's concept) is exist, because on some point it is really make sense (with the whole thing about 'Big Hit planned HYYH concept since years ago'.
Back to SeeU,
I=Fantasy was created by Hitman Bang, the father of our lovely boys. He made the lyric.
It's seen on the lyric:
I'm a dream, a dream, I'm a dream
I=Fantasy Fantasy
I'm an open door, a door, put anything through me
Have fun with me, let me take care of you
I'm, I=Fantasy
The bold line clearly says that SeeU is a dream, SeeU is a fantasy, so it's possible for her to create anything.
And how is this connected to BTS' HYYH?
Well, as we know, Big Hit's girl group, GLAM, was disbanded after Dahee's scandal. And Dahee is SeeU's voice bank. It's simply mean that Dahee is SeeU's voice actress. Since Dahee is jailed, SeeU is now also deactivated and not sold anymore. Her website is also being taken down.
And with that, SeeU is done.
SeeU's first appearance is on 2011.
GLAM debuted in 2012.
BTS debuted in 2013.
Since SeeU is no more promising, and GLAM is too, why not giving this concept to our rookie, BTS?
This explained how Big Hit is already planned this since BTS's No More Dream era.
How if Big Hit give this concept to BTS with some changes? What if Big Hit creative team bring up this concept when Namjoon say they want to make a song about youth's shits?
Bam.
Or maybe the whole HYYH thing is not originally from Namjoon and the rest of the gang. Maybe someone in Big Hit already planned Bangtan's album line up, like the transition of School Luv Affair trilogy to Dark and Wild to HYYH.
It's all planned, I believe that. I think they didn't just sit down and casually said "Hey, what's for our next comeback?"
Actually, SeeU's concept is not that dark.
SeeU's first official debut song is titled RUN. And if you search it up on Google, the lyric is the total opposite of BTS's RUN.
By dark I mean we see a lot of suicidal thought in those M/Vs, right?
I think when they (Big Hit creative team - or whatever it called) planned BTS's album line up, they thought of SeeU's concept but then it didn't quite fit with Bangtan's hip hop theme. Plus, Namjoon and the rest said that they want to make something about youth, so, why not darkening the concept a bit?
In short, what am I trying to say here is,
This HYYH concept is legit created from long time ago, with a lot of thinking and editing. I just want to confirm it, lol, since nobody talks about this. Well, as long as I know. Everyone simply talk about 'oh my, they already planned this since God know when' but they didn't ask why or how.
But then, HYYH's general idea is great. Very great. Like what I said, the main storyline itself is a simple one. Maybe a great idea in general. But the general idea itself is the problem. It can creates an ENDLESS storyline, if we want to take a moment and seriously think about it.
But it's about one thing for sure. It's about youth, and how are we dealing with shits in our youth life.
:)
Tell me what you think! And feel free to correct me if I wrong!
also posted on my tumblr here
+ posted on 20160613 at 23:23
I decided to make this random post, I had no idea why I made this at the first time. But, well, here I am.
Last year (which is actually still few months ago) I bought quite a lot of book. I didn't buy it all, some of it wasn't bought with my own money, lol, but, it's still my book, so, yeah.
The notable thing was I got my Connor Franta's 'A Work In Progress' (which was bought by my aunt's money, lol, thank you so much). They didn't sell it here, because I don't know why. But then I saw Zoe's books (both Girls Online and Girls Online on Tour) in my local bookstore! It was not fair! Why we didn't get Connor's book, or Dan's book, or Tyler's book here??
So I called my aunt (with my parent's permission, lol) and ask if she could buy me that book, hehe, and she said yes.
Hehe.
This year I'm about to ask her to buy me tabinof, but, nah, I'll just buy it with my own money this time.
(which is making my wallet cries because tabinof is just too damn expensive if you convert it to Indonesia's Rupiah)
So last year I got A Work In Progress (by Connor Franta), which was a cool book, by the way. I like all the random photograph taken by Connor himself. And the paper is just so nice! We don't have that kind of paper here. Indonesia's paper is just too boring.
And I got a few comic books too. Here's a list if you want to read this.
- Black Butler (by Yana Toboso) vol. 20
- montage (by Jun Watanabe) vol. 1 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- No. 6 (by Atsuko Asano) vol. 1 - 5 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Boys Living (by Mai Nishikata) This book is, somehow, popular around my friends. Because it has some yaoi hints!
- The Angel Clock (by Una Watanabe) vol. 1 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Seiyuu! Say You! (by Hirotaka Kisaragi) vol. 1 - 2 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Samurai Drive! (by Fujiko Kosumi) vol. 1 - 2 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Hometown Restaurant & I (by Yuu Fujiwara) vol. 1 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Replica (by Karakara Kemuri) vol. 1 - 2 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Pandora Hearts (by Jun Mochizuki) vol. 23
- and a few Detective Conan (by Aoyama Gosho)
Actually I just kept loyal to Kuroshitsuji, lmao. I just need to buy the third volume, and, bam! My collection is complete! Well, not complete, tho, since the book itself is not completed yet.
And Pandora Hearts too. The final book is out this year. I need few early volumes to complete my collection. I don't think I can buy it today tho. My first volume of Kuroshitsuji was bought in Kinokuniya, so it's the largest comic in my bookshelf (along with Nabari no Ou, actually, but we're talking about kuroshitsuji here.)
Let's move on to the novel!
Tbh I thought I bought a lot of novel on 2k15, but well it's only three books.
I bought The Heart of Glass by Vivian French last year. It's the first book of tales from five kingdoms. It's a fantasy novel, and very very easy to read. It's like A Tale Dark and Grimm (if you already read that) and The Graveyard Book.
I read it in one sitting, because the book itself is not too thick, and the font is also not too small. And like I said, very easy to read, so, I bet you can also read it in one sitting like me.
Next is The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by Washington Irving. It turned out to be a collection of stories book, not a novel. I bought it because of Tim Burton, actually, haha. I just watch his movie and suddenly this book appeared in the local bookstore, so, why nah.
The last one is Kilah by Vinca Callista. This is, surprisingly, is a psychothriller novel by Indonesian author. I bought it because the cover was too cute, lol. Really, it is cute. Search it up on Google, you will call it cute and beautiful, I'm sure.
When I saw this, I was like, 'oh wow, a psychothriller novel with a beautiful cover? And Indonesian author?'
I doubt this book at first, but why not give a try? So I bought this and read this in, what, three sitting? Because of school stuffs. This book itself is not too thick. I'd say this is quite a thin book, actually. It's not as thick as the usual book with the same genre.
And it is good! Good plot twist, good POVs, and a good and proper language! Yes, the reason why I don't like Indonesian author's book is because of the slang language they use in the dialogue. And this Vinca girl is not using that slang too much in her book.
The story itself is good, but, idk, not as good as international writer? I mean, I don't get the same feelings when I read Hunger Games or Harry Potter, or maybe it's because of the different genre? I'm not sure.
But this book is recommended, really.
And moving to 2k16!
The notable book is Lady Midnight by Cassandra Clare! I bought this four days after it released in US! Yay! I'm in the middle of National Exam week, tho, so I can't read it right away like what I want to do.
But I read it in, what, four of six sitting? Actually, if I didn't sneak up reading it between my study session, I can read it in much shorter time. I will just read one chapter between my study session, lmao, and when I'm finally free from national exam, I read the rest of it in only two days.
Unfortunately I bought it in paperback edition, so I'm afraid the cover might tear apart or something. It is thick, you know.
Lady Midnight is a really good book. Usually I'm not into that romance thingy, but for Cassie I will read a bunch of Clace crap or Sizzy crap or just Wessa crap and the other crap she writes.
Emma and Jules here are just adorable! And I'm glad she still including yaoi thing inside her book, lmao, like what she did with Alec and Magnus (and I was too busy fangirling over them, oh my God).
And I also buy Red Queen by Victoria Aveyard. I saw this book a lot in instagram, and I wonder if I could buy it online (like what I did to Lady Midnight) but then I randomly go to my local bookstore and bam! This book was sitting nicely on the bookshelf!
I bought this right on my birthday, because I was alone in the house at that time (because everyone was visiting my grandpa in Bali) so I considered that book as my birthday present for myself. I didn't read it right away, I spent hours to watch Dan and Phil's video instead. And I bought Magnum too.
Next thing to buy this year: The Amazing Book is Not On Fire!
Yes, I've been eyeing this book for months, and finally today I have money to buy it!
But I want the UK version, but I can only buy the US version of it. Urgh, it's so irritating, considering it's only minor changes, actually. But I have this weird OCD about books.
What else did I buy on this early year?
Ah, I bought Agatha Christie's Man In The Brown Suit for a very cheap price, because the bookstore is having a sale. Good stuffs, as always. I already have a few title of Christie's book, and it's great! All of them!
And for the comic books...
I buy the final volume of Pandora Hearts, and recently, the newest volume of Black Butler. And I also buy the first volume of Devil Survivor. I want to be loyal to this one, because Pandora Hearts is over, but, well, I'm not sure.
Anyway, that's the physical book!
I read a lot of e-book these days. I read all the Shadowhunter series by pdf, except Lady Midnight. And by the shadowhunter series I mean all of them. City of Bones, Ashes, Glass, Fallen Angels, Lost Soul, and the last, City of Heavenly Fire. And also The Infernal Device; Clockwork Angel, Clockwork Prince, and Clockwork Princess. And also The Bane Chronicles. And also Tales from Shadowhunter Academy.
Well, that's a lot.
And I recently finished Veronica Roth's Allegiant in my phone. Now I'm currently reading Fangirl by Rainbow Ho- I mean, Rainbow Rowell.
I try to read it because it's on Zoella's book list, lmao. And because she said it will be a great help to a fanfic writers cause it contains some writing tips.
And I'm done!
Still have a long wish list, tho, and since it's only the beginning of the year (it's not) my collection may be increasing~
Last year (which is actually still few months ago) I bought quite a lot of book. I didn't buy it all, some of it wasn't bought with my own money, lol, but, it's still my book, so, yeah.
The notable thing was I got my Connor Franta's 'A Work In Progress' (which was bought by my aunt's money, lol, thank you so much). They didn't sell it here, because I don't know why. But then I saw Zoe's books (both Girls Online and Girls Online on Tour) in my local bookstore! It was not fair! Why we didn't get Connor's book, or Dan's book, or Tyler's book here??
So I called my aunt (with my parent's permission, lol) and ask if she could buy me that book, hehe, and she said yes.
Hehe.
This year I'm about to ask her to buy me tabinof, but, nah, I'll just buy it with my own money this time.
(which is making my wallet cries because tabinof is just too damn expensive if you convert it to Indonesia's Rupiah)
So last year I got A Work In Progress (by Connor Franta), which was a cool book, by the way. I like all the random photograph taken by Connor himself. And the paper is just so nice! We don't have that kind of paper here. Indonesia's paper is just too boring.
And I got a few comic books too. Here's a list if you want to read this.
- Black Butler (by Yana Toboso) vol. 20
- montage (by Jun Watanabe) vol. 1 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- No. 6 (by Atsuko Asano) vol. 1 - 5 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Boys Living (by Mai Nishikata) This book is, somehow, popular around my friends. Because it has some yaoi hints!
- The Angel Clock (by Una Watanabe) vol. 1 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Seiyuu! Say You! (by Hirotaka Kisaragi) vol. 1 - 2 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Samurai Drive! (by Fujiko Kosumi) vol. 1 - 2 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Hometown Restaurant & I (by Yuu Fujiwara) vol. 1 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Replica (by Karakara Kemuri) vol. 1 - 2 (I didn't buy the continuation)
- Pandora Hearts (by Jun Mochizuki) vol. 23
- and a few Detective Conan (by Aoyama Gosho)
Actually I just kept loyal to Kuroshitsuji, lmao. I just need to buy the third volume, and, bam! My collection is complete! Well, not complete, tho, since the book itself is not completed yet.
And Pandora Hearts too. The final book is out this year. I need few early volumes to complete my collection. I don't think I can buy it today tho. My first volume of Kuroshitsuji was bought in Kinokuniya, so it's the largest comic in my bookshelf (along with Nabari no Ou, actually, but we're talking about kuroshitsuji here.)
Let's move on to the novel!
Tbh I thought I bought a lot of novel on 2k15, but well it's only three books.
I bought The Heart of Glass by Vivian French last year. It's the first book of tales from five kingdoms. It's a fantasy novel, and very very easy to read. It's like A Tale Dark and Grimm (if you already read that) and The Graveyard Book.
I read it in one sitting, because the book itself is not too thick, and the font is also not too small. And like I said, very easy to read, so, I bet you can also read it in one sitting like me.
Next is The Legend of Sleepy Hollow by Washington Irving. It turned out to be a collection of stories book, not a novel. I bought it because of Tim Burton, actually, haha. I just watch his movie and suddenly this book appeared in the local bookstore, so, why nah.
The last one is Kilah by Vinca Callista. This is, surprisingly, is a psychothriller novel by Indonesian author. I bought it because the cover was too cute, lol. Really, it is cute. Search it up on Google, you will call it cute and beautiful, I'm sure.
When I saw this, I was like, 'oh wow, a psychothriller novel with a beautiful cover? And Indonesian author?'
I doubt this book at first, but why not give a try? So I bought this and read this in, what, three sitting? Because of school stuffs. This book itself is not too thick. I'd say this is quite a thin book, actually. It's not as thick as the usual book with the same genre.
And it is good! Good plot twist, good POVs, and a good and proper language! Yes, the reason why I don't like Indonesian author's book is because of the slang language they use in the dialogue. And this Vinca girl is not using that slang too much in her book.
The story itself is good, but, idk, not as good as international writer? I mean, I don't get the same feelings when I read Hunger Games or Harry Potter, or maybe it's because of the different genre? I'm not sure.
But this book is recommended, really.
And moving to 2k16!
The notable book is Lady Midnight by Cassandra Clare! I bought this four days after it released in US! Yay! I'm in the middle of National Exam week, tho, so I can't read it right away like what I want to do.
But I read it in, what, four of six sitting? Actually, if I didn't sneak up reading it between my study session, I can read it in much shorter time. I will just read one chapter between my study session, lmao, and when I'm finally free from national exam, I read the rest of it in only two days.
Unfortunately I bought it in paperback edition, so I'm afraid the cover might tear apart or something. It is thick, you know.
Lady Midnight is a really good book. Usually I'm not into that romance thingy, but for Cassie I will read a bunch of Clace crap or Sizzy crap or just Wessa crap and the other crap she writes.
Emma and Jules here are just adorable! And I'm glad she still including yaoi thing inside her book, lmao, like what she did with Alec and Magnus (and I was too busy fangirling over them, oh my God).
And I also buy Red Queen by Victoria Aveyard. I saw this book a lot in instagram, and I wonder if I could buy it online (like what I did to Lady Midnight) but then I randomly go to my local bookstore and bam! This book was sitting nicely on the bookshelf!
I bought this right on my birthday, because I was alone in the house at that time (because everyone was visiting my grandpa in Bali) so I considered that book as my birthday present for myself. I didn't read it right away, I spent hours to watch Dan and Phil's video instead. And I bought Magnum too.
Next thing to buy this year: The Amazing Book is Not On Fire!
Yes, I've been eyeing this book for months, and finally today I have money to buy it!
But I want the UK version, but I can only buy the US version of it. Urgh, it's so irritating, considering it's only minor changes, actually. But I have this weird OCD about books.
What else did I buy on this early year?
Ah, I bought Agatha Christie's Man In The Brown Suit for a very cheap price, because the bookstore is having a sale. Good stuffs, as always. I already have a few title of Christie's book, and it's great! All of them!
And for the comic books...
I buy the final volume of Pandora Hearts, and recently, the newest volume of Black Butler. And I also buy the first volume of Devil Survivor. I want to be loyal to this one, because Pandora Hearts is over, but, well, I'm not sure.
Anyway, that's the physical book!
I read a lot of e-book these days. I read all the Shadowhunter series by pdf, except Lady Midnight. And by the shadowhunter series I mean all of them. City of Bones, Ashes, Glass, Fallen Angels, Lost Soul, and the last, City of Heavenly Fire. And also The Infernal Device; Clockwork Angel, Clockwork Prince, and Clockwork Princess. And also The Bane Chronicles. And also Tales from Shadowhunter Academy.
Well, that's a lot.
And I recently finished Veronica Roth's Allegiant in my phone. Now I'm currently reading Fangirl by Rainbow Ho- I mean, Rainbow Rowell.
I try to read it because it's on Zoella's book list, lmao. And because she said it will be a great help to a fanfic writers cause it contains some writing tips.
And I'm done!
Still have a long wish list, tho, and since it's only the beginning of the year (it's not) my collection may be increasing~
Labels: review
+ posted on 20160612 at 23:22
I just watched Shadowhunters first episode - and so far it's good.
There's so many discussions I ever read about the casts, but, well, it's okay for me tho. I still prefer Lily as Clary, Jamie as Jace, Jemima as Isabelle and Godfrey Gao for Magnus! But I definitely love Alec on the TV series, lmao. Alec is supposed to be as tall as Jace - or if I'm not mistaken, even slightly taller than Jace in the book. Matthew is just perfect.
Ah, and Valentine too. The TV series' Valentine is more acceptable than the movie's version - I think.
And now about the plot!
It's interesting how they make Clary know about her actual identity as a shadowhunter. I think if they keep the same plot as the book, it will be boring. We all already know the story - there's no surprises! It's a good choice they modified the plot a little bit.
And the institute! It's supposed to be empty, lmao. There's only Jace, Alec, Isabelle, Hodge and Church! Do they use a cat in this TV series???? Church is important!
Anyway,
But with the new script, maybe they need many people in the institute? I don't know, maybe. But it can messed up some point like... like what? I forgot the exact story based in the novel already.
There's new character too - Dot, who is she, I didn't recall Jocelyn has an assistant.
Or is Dot Madam Dorothea?? Nah, it can't be. Madam Dorothea supposed to be a witch's step daughter, not a warlock, and she's after the mortal cup too.
The sophisticated technology in the institute is grrreat - but I like the old and elegant institute in the movie version. Plus, the novel version of the institute is like that too.
Wait, is it?
Anyway,
I like how they bring out Isabelle's cooking in the second episode, hahahahahahaha. I'm still in minutes 13 so I don't know if Simon eat it or nah. But Jace's whispers to him to don't eat any food lmao, I hope they do the scene when they ordered the Chinese take outs.
And the restaurant! What is the name again? Taki's?
I'd like to see Taki's in the TV series! All the downworlders will be there; vampires, warlocks, faeries...
Overall this TV series' version is good. You can watch it if you want. The animation is quite good too; thinking that this is not a movie project, so the effects may be not as good as the movie, but it's acceptable.
That's all...? I don't know. I still paused my second episode just to write this - and maybe there's more proper review about this series in the future - since I decided to watch this TV series.
C'ya!
update
So just now Magnus called Dot as Dothy - so it's possible that this Dot is Madame Dorothea. But she's trying to protect Clary - or she just want to know about the mortal cup?
See, the new script is interesting! New characters - well, new personality of a character to be exact.
Let's patiently wait for the third episode (:
update
So just now Magnus called Dot as Dothy - so it's possible that this Dot is Madame Dorothea. But she's trying to protect Clary - or she just want to know about the mortal cup?
See, the new script is interesting! New characters - well, new personality of a character to be exact.
Let's patiently wait for the third episode (:
Labels: review, shadowhunters
+ posted on 20160123 at 22:41
What I like about bangtan's In the Mood for Love both part one and part two is how they managed to attract us uniquely. First, with the complicated storyline. I believe I already wrote about the complicated storyline here .
And second, how they actually do the concept whole heartedly. I don't say that the other groups didn't do their comeback concept properly, but, ugh, after watching this dance practice video I just realized how soulful the dance is. I mean, there's an emotion involved in the dance! And the same thing happen with I Need U.
I got touched by how they make a butterfly pose in the end of the dance, like, it actually has something related with butterfly. The butterfly shadow in Prologue, Butterfly Dreams Exhibition, butterfly in Jin's photo teaser, song track no. 2 titled butterfly, and now this pose!
I don't know what happen to me but bangtan made me emotional, like, seriously, emotional. Like, who cried in the middle of the night just because Hoseok threw his pills onto fire? Who cried in the middle of the night when bangtan got their first win with I Need U? AND ALSO CRYING BECAUSE JIMIN THE CUTIEPIE IS CRYING TOO HE'S TOO HAPPY OH MY GOD I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE
-stop.
Bangtan makes me emotional these days. Really. I know, I'm overreacted, but, I just appreciated Namjoon's music that much. And by that much means I'll go crying because Taehyung stabs the actor or Jimin drowned himself.
-stop.
What I'm trying to say here is that bangtan's RUN dance practice is awesome. The moves is simple but beautiful, and (I don't want to sound too biased but, hell, I am an A.R.M.Y!) bless Song Seung Duk(?) teacher; they got the emotional feelings on that dance. Yasss.
Okay.
That's all.
And second, how they actually do the concept whole heartedly. I don't say that the other groups didn't do their comeback concept properly, but, ugh, after watching this dance practice video I just realized how soulful the dance is. I mean, there's an emotion involved in the dance! And the same thing happen with I Need U.
I got touched by how they make a butterfly pose in the end of the dance, like, it actually has something related with butterfly. The butterfly shadow in Prologue, Butterfly Dreams Exhibition, butterfly in Jin's photo teaser, song track no. 2 titled butterfly, and now this pose!
I don't know what happen to me but bangtan made me emotional, like, seriously, emotional. Like, who cried in the middle of the night just because Hoseok threw his pills onto fire? Who cried in the middle of the night when bangtan got their first win with I Need U? AND ALSO CRYING BECAUSE JIMIN THE CUTIEPIE IS CRYING TOO HE'S TOO HAPPY OH MY GOD I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE
-stop.
Bangtan makes me emotional these days. Really. I know, I'm overreacted, but, I just appreciated Namjoon's music that much. And by that much means I'll go crying because Taehyung stabs the actor or Jimin drowned himself.
-stop.
What I'm trying to say here is that bangtan's RUN dance practice is awesome. The moves is simple but beautiful, and (I don't want to sound too biased but, hell, I am an A.R.M.Y!) bless Song Seung Duk(?) teacher; they got the emotional feelings on that dance. Yasss.
Okay.
That's all.
+ posted on 20151209 at 22:35
Jadi, ini post kilat setelah selama tiga jam baca ansatsu 4 volume di depan laptop nonstop. Nggak pakai kacamata lagi //mataku bertahanlah.
Warning, long post with subject which is very weaboo. So, please leave if you don't like, thank you.
Dan ini topik seputar manga Assassination Classroom (atau ansatsu biar cepet) oleh Matsui Yuusei. In general, mungkin bisa dicerna bagi yang nggak pernah baca manganya atau nonton animenya, tapi disarankan baca/nonton biar lebih greget dan ngeh gitu! //promosi
Dan karena Karma yang kubicarakan disini adalah seorang anak laki-laki rambut merah nyebelin dan bikin greget orang yang mirip Seijurou Akashi, bukan kata 'karma' yang berarti... berarti apa ya? //buka kamus
Dan, firstly, kehidupan perfect memang cuma ada di fiksi. Nggak mungkin kita dapat guru bahasa Inggris pembunuh bayaran kayak Irina, dan orang yang pinternya nggak tanggung kayak Asano.
Tapi paling nggak, setiap fiksi paling geje sekalipun ada moral valuenya. Dan Ansatsu ini moral valuenya jelas banget, pasti ada di setiap chapter atau di setiap permasalahan.
Moral valuenya banyaaak; jangan jadi orang sok lah, kita kudu pantang menyerah lah, kita kudu manfaatin segala kemampuan yang kita miliki lah, pokok banyak deh. (makanya, baca deh komiknya //lho)
Tapi yang mau aku tulis disini cuma masalah kelasnya.
Kelas 3-E itu isinya anak-anak yang, eh, istilahnya paling jelek di seluruh sekolah, ya nggak sih. Dan somehow ada satu orang yang-
bukan, Korosensei bukan orang.
-satu makhluk yang bisa bikin satu kelas itu jadi kompak dengan berbagai permasalahan yang ada. Dan masalah kelas ini bikin aku inget sama kelasku sendiri.
Kelasku, hahahahahaha, biasa aja sih sebenarnya. Tapi kesenjangannya itu lho, meskipun nggak sebesar kelas satu dulu, di kelas dua ini masih ada. Sudah berkali-kali kita ngadain 'honest-talk' tapi rasanya feeling 'nggak-bakal-bisa-jadi-satu' itu masih ada dan kentara banget.
Jadi, apakah kita butuh makhluk geje, mesum, plus baik hati yang bertentakel kuning buat bikin kelas kita jadi kompak?
Yak, sapa mau cosplay jadi Korosensei? //no
Menurutku, kelas 3-E itu bisa jadi kompak karena mereka punya satu tujuan yang sama, yaitu ngebunuh Korosensei. Disamping itu, cara ngebunuh makhluk aneh bertentakel kuning itu bisa dilakukan kalau mereka kerja sama. Nah, disitu letak permasalahannya. Kelas 3-E jadi kompak gara-gara mereka kerja sama satu kelas buat ngerencanain pembunuhan si guru bertentakel itu.
Oke, kalimat itu agakan gimana gitu ya //plak
Dan, lanjut, karena ini rencana pembunuhan, mereka harus bisa meng-eksplor sumber daya manusia yang ada di kelas itu. Intinya mereka jadi harus megenal satu sama lain dan ngerti potensi yang ada di satu sama lain. Contohnya si Itona. Sebenarnya dia anak geje nyebelin yang tiba-tiba muncul nyerang Korosensei pake tentakel punya dia sendiri. Tapi setelah tentakelnya ngilang, dan anak kelas 3-E baik-baik ke dia, ternyata si Itona guna juga 'kan? Dia pinter ngutek-ngutek alat elektronik gitu, jadi bisa bantuin temennya ngintip celana dalam cewek. NO. Jadi bisa bantuin temennya keluar dari penjara waktu kena trap di chapter 108.
Dan, kayaknya, si Itona bisa lepas dari tentakelnya gara-gara anak kelas 3-E nyelametin dia nggak sih? Jadi, peran penting dalam membuat kekompakan kelas kalau mengacu pada kelas 3-E yaitu ... Jangan dendam, jadilah anak yang pemaaf, jangan terlalu kebakar emosi! Nah.
Bisa dilihat di sepanjang chapter... Setiap kali ada karakter nyebelin baru yang masuk jadi penghuni kelas 3-E (jadi anak kelas itu maksudnya) anak kelas yang lama bakalan sebel pada awalnya. Terus ntar si Korosensei nyadarin bahwa ada sesuatu yang bikin anak itu berkelakuan nyebelin gitu, dan anak kelas 3-E bakalan "Oh, makanya dia berkelakuan gitu ya?" dan mereka bakalan berusaha buat menyadarkan si anak nyebelin itu biar nggak nyebelin, dan ending-endingnya si anak nyebelin itu bisa jadi kekuatan tersendiri bagi mereka buat nyempurnain rencana ngebunuh Korosensei.
That's the point, kalau ada satu anak nyebelin di kelas, kita kudu tahu kenapa mereka kok bisa nyebelin, dan menemukan solusinya BERSAMA-SAMA. Bukannya malah pakai cara endless nyindir. //sorry not sorry
Oke. Stop. Sampai sini kayaknya sudah amat sangat menggurui. Maafkan saya. Tapi curcolan ini masih berlanjut.
Sepanjang aku baca ansatsu ini (di lepi, dengan mata terpancar radiasi desktop selama berjam-jam uhuhu) aku beneran ngiri sama kondisi kelasnya. Bukan ruang kelasnya sih. Bobrok gitu -3- //eh
Tapi sama isi kelasnya. Kelas 3-E itu isinya komplit, ada yang tukang onar, ada yang pinter banget, ada yang diem, ada yang biasa aja... pokok lengkap lah. Yang bikin aku seneng itu mereka bisa bikin keragaman itu jadi suatu kekuatan. Yah, meskipun disini kekuatan membunuh gurunya, sih. Dan mereka ber... ber berapa itu satu kelas? Pokok, mereka semua itu saling percaya satu sama lain, yang endingnya bikin mereka betah di kelas itu dan nggak mau pindah ke kelas lain yang lebih baik.
Yah, sekali lagi saya ketikkan, kehidupan perfect itu cuma ada di fiksi.
To be honest, I never felt that same feeling in my class. Is it just me, or, when the rumor that our soon third grade's classmate will be re-mixed announced, I didn't feel like "Oh, what?? But I don't want that!". I just accepted the news easily and "Oh, really? It's okay then,". I'm not sorry.
That's why, baca Ansatsu ini benar-benar menyenangkan.
Yah, disamping aku baca karena NagisaxKarma sih.
Dan, OH, ada satu hal yang kurang di kelasku di sekolah. KITA NGGAK PERNAH DAPET GURU YANG NGERTI KITA KAYAK KOROSENSEI.
Well, nggak mungkin banget sih, sebenarnya, kita punya guru yang bakalan benar-benar tau kondisi kelas kita luar dalam, karena kalo di real life kita cenderung menghindari guru, ahahahahaha.
Tapi, the lack of teacher itu yang sebenarnya bisa bikin kelas berpotensi untuk amburadul.
Kalau diperhatikan sejak chapter awal-awal, yang bikin semua anak di kelas 3-E semangat itu Korosensei. Yang nyeramahin mereka pas ada anak nyebelin itu Korosensei. Yang nyadarin dan ngerubah sifat anak nyebelin itu Korosensei (Karma tuh huahaha). Jadi kalau diliat-liat si guru itu juga pegang peran penting buat keselamatan, no, kesejahteraan anak didiknya.
Oke, mungkin sampai sini bakal ada yang argumen
"Lho, kan ada BK, kan biasanya guru itu bakalan nyeramahin anak nakal gitu, tapi lihat hasilnya, nggak efektif!"
Yah, lihat dulu nyeramahinnya gimana.
Entah ya, apakah di dunia nyata beginian bisa berhasil apa enggak aku juga nggak tahu. Tapiii, gimana kalau nyeramahinnya pake cara baik-baik? Maksudku, bukan dengan "Kamu jangan ngerokok! Ngerokok bisa bikin kamu penyakitan!" tapi dengan lebih mencontohkan hasil nyata dari perbuatannya. Kalau langsung ngelarang gitu bakalan malah bikin si anak jadi makin pingin ngelakuin!
Dan bukan dengan dipanggil ke kantor dan diceramahin, tapi dengan si guru ngomongin santai macam sambil makan di kantin gitu deh.
Ah, mbulet ah.
Jadi, ini sudah hampir jam dua pagi dan aku semakin ngantuk. Ini curcolan semakin ngawur saja isinya.
Jadi, balik ke masalah kelas.
Ada satu lagi masalah yang bikin kelas jadi nggak enak. Anak pendiam! Berdasarkan referensi dari kehidupan sehari-hari, anak pendiam biasanya bakalan terus didiamkan.... teruusss dan terus hingga akhir masa sekolahnya, dan biasanya dia cuma bakalan punya beberapa teman aja, yang nggak jarang juga sama diamnya.
Gimana kalau dibikin kayak masalahnya si Okuda Manami si maniak kimia di 3-E... Dia kan pendiam tuh (yah, berdasarkan apa yang digambarkan di komiknya, sih) dan cara anak kelas 3-E buat dia nggak terlalu kuper itu dengan membuatnya bisa melebarkan sayap dengan kemampuannya, yaitu ahli kimia. Dan, yak, bisa dibilang sekarang si Okuda jadi pemasok racun-racun dan ramuan-ramuan lain buat rencana pembunuhan Korosensei.
That's another point, jangan sindir anak pendiam gara-gara diamnya. Find their skill first, then let them spread their wings.
Yah, misal ada anak pendiam gamer otaku yang suka mojok di kelas dengan headset terpasang dan mata terpaku di layar hape yang ternyata lagi muter anime ecchi terbaru //what. Eh, ternyata dia pinter fisika! Yah, jangan malah dihina gara-gara suka nonton ecchi-nya. Bikin dia merasa terbutuhkan, minta mereka ngerjain soal-soal fisika yang kita nggak paham, dan thank them for that. Ulangi cycle itu, sampai mereka ngerasa "Ah, ternyata temenku ngebutuhin aku juga."
Well, kalau itu anak nggak mau ngebuka diri juga ya berarti dia yang agakan geje. //gak
//btw itu "anak gamer otaku yang suka mojok di kelas dengan headset terpasang dan mata terpaku di layar hape yang ternyata lagi muter anime ecchi terbaru" berasal dari karangan saya semata. Tidak merujuk pada seseorang tertentu yang saya kenal.
//ngakak
Apalagi ya...
Ah, pokok intinya kelas 3-E itu keren deh. Anak-anaknya saling mensupport, they trust each other, dan yang paling penting mereka merasa nyaman sama kondisi kelas mereka walaupun belajar di gedung bobrok di tengah gunung gitu. I want that class so badly - but, well, all I can do is accepting what I have now.
Dan mereka punya Korosensei yang bisa ngesupport mereka dalam kondisi apapun dengan kekuatan Mach-nya itu. I want that kind of teacher!!
//sedot idung
Dan untuk mengakhiri post geje ini... alangkah baiknya untuk tetap sadar diri dan menyadari bahwa kelas seperti itu sangat susah untuk didapatkan....
Oyasumi ~
Warning, long post with subject which is very weaboo. So, please leave if you don't like, thank you.
Dan ini topik seputar manga Assassination Classroom (atau ansatsu biar cepet) oleh Matsui Yuusei. In general, mungkin bisa dicerna bagi yang nggak pernah baca manganya atau nonton animenya, tapi disarankan baca/nonton biar lebih greget dan ngeh gitu! //promosi
Dan karena Karma yang kubicarakan disini adalah seorang anak laki-laki rambut merah nyebelin dan bikin greget orang yang mirip Seijurou Akashi, bukan kata 'karma' yang berarti... berarti apa ya? //buka kamus
Dan, firstly, kehidupan perfect memang cuma ada di fiksi. Nggak mungkin kita dapat guru bahasa Inggris pembunuh bayaran kayak Irina, dan orang yang pinternya nggak tanggung kayak Asano.
Tapi paling nggak, setiap fiksi paling geje sekalipun ada moral valuenya. Dan Ansatsu ini moral valuenya jelas banget, pasti ada di setiap chapter atau di setiap permasalahan.
Moral valuenya banyaaak; jangan jadi orang sok lah, kita kudu pantang menyerah lah, kita kudu manfaatin segala kemampuan yang kita miliki lah, pokok banyak deh. (makanya, baca deh komiknya //lho)
Tapi yang mau aku tulis disini cuma masalah kelasnya.
Kelas 3-E itu isinya anak-anak yang, eh, istilahnya paling jelek di seluruh sekolah, ya nggak sih. Dan somehow ada satu orang yang-
bukan, Korosensei bukan orang.
-satu makhluk yang bisa bikin satu kelas itu jadi kompak dengan berbagai permasalahan yang ada. Dan masalah kelas ini bikin aku inget sama kelasku sendiri.
Kelasku, hahahahahaha, biasa aja sih sebenarnya. Tapi kesenjangannya itu lho, meskipun nggak sebesar kelas satu dulu, di kelas dua ini masih ada. Sudah berkali-kali kita ngadain 'honest-talk' tapi rasanya feeling 'nggak-bakal-bisa-jadi-satu' itu masih ada dan kentara banget.
Jadi, apakah kita butuh makhluk geje, mesum, plus baik hati yang bertentakel kuning buat bikin kelas kita jadi kompak?
Yak, sapa mau cosplay jadi Korosensei? //no
Menurutku, kelas 3-E itu bisa jadi kompak karena mereka punya satu tujuan yang sama, yaitu ngebunuh Korosensei. Disamping itu, cara ngebunuh makhluk aneh bertentakel kuning itu bisa dilakukan kalau mereka kerja sama. Nah, disitu letak permasalahannya. Kelas 3-E jadi kompak gara-gara mereka kerja sama satu kelas buat ngerencanain pembunuhan si guru bertentakel itu.
Oke, kalimat itu agakan gimana gitu ya //plak
Dan, lanjut, karena ini rencana pembunuhan, mereka harus bisa meng-eksplor sumber daya manusia yang ada di kelas itu. Intinya mereka jadi harus megenal satu sama lain dan ngerti potensi yang ada di satu sama lain. Contohnya si Itona. Sebenarnya dia anak geje nyebelin yang tiba-tiba muncul nyerang Korosensei pake tentakel punya dia sendiri. Tapi setelah tentakelnya ngilang, dan anak kelas 3-E baik-baik ke dia, ternyata si Itona guna juga 'kan? Dia pinter ngutek-ngutek alat elektronik gitu, jadi bisa bantuin temennya ngintip celana dalam cewek. NO. Jadi bisa bantuin temennya keluar dari penjara waktu kena trap di chapter 108.
Dan, kayaknya, si Itona bisa lepas dari tentakelnya gara-gara anak kelas 3-E nyelametin dia nggak sih? Jadi, peran penting dalam membuat kekompakan kelas kalau mengacu pada kelas 3-E yaitu ... Jangan dendam, jadilah anak yang pemaaf, jangan terlalu kebakar emosi! Nah.
Bisa dilihat di sepanjang chapter... Setiap kali ada karakter nyebelin baru yang masuk jadi penghuni kelas 3-E (jadi anak kelas itu maksudnya) anak kelas yang lama bakalan sebel pada awalnya. Terus ntar si Korosensei nyadarin bahwa ada sesuatu yang bikin anak itu berkelakuan nyebelin gitu, dan anak kelas 3-E bakalan "Oh, makanya dia berkelakuan gitu ya?" dan mereka bakalan berusaha buat menyadarkan si anak nyebelin itu biar nggak nyebelin, dan ending-endingnya si anak nyebelin itu bisa jadi kekuatan tersendiri bagi mereka buat nyempurnain rencana ngebunuh Korosensei.
That's the point, kalau ada satu anak nyebelin di kelas, kita kudu tahu kenapa mereka kok bisa nyebelin, dan menemukan solusinya BERSAMA-SAMA. Bukannya malah pakai cara endless nyindir. //sorry not sorry
Oke. Stop. Sampai sini kayaknya sudah amat sangat menggurui. Maafkan saya. Tapi curcolan ini masih berlanjut.
Sepanjang aku baca ansatsu ini (di lepi, dengan mata terpancar radiasi desktop selama berjam-jam uhuhu) aku beneran ngiri sama kondisi kelasnya. Bukan ruang kelasnya sih. Bobrok gitu -3- //eh
Tapi sama isi kelasnya. Kelas 3-E itu isinya komplit, ada yang tukang onar, ada yang pinter banget, ada yang diem, ada yang biasa aja... pokok lengkap lah. Yang bikin aku seneng itu mereka bisa bikin keragaman itu jadi suatu kekuatan. Yah, meskipun disini kekuatan membunuh gurunya, sih. Dan mereka ber... ber berapa itu satu kelas? Pokok, mereka semua itu saling percaya satu sama lain, yang endingnya bikin mereka betah di kelas itu dan nggak mau pindah ke kelas lain yang lebih baik.
Yah, sekali lagi saya ketikkan, kehidupan perfect itu cuma ada di fiksi.
To be honest, I never felt that same feeling in my class. Is it just me, or, when the rumor that our soon third grade's classmate will be re-mixed announced, I didn't feel like "Oh, what?? But I don't want that!". I just accepted the news easily and "Oh, really? It's okay then,". I'm not sorry.
That's why, baca Ansatsu ini benar-benar menyenangkan.
Yah, disamping aku baca karena NagisaxKarma sih.
Dan, OH, ada satu hal yang kurang di kelasku di sekolah. KITA NGGAK PERNAH DAPET GURU YANG NGERTI KITA KAYAK KOROSENSEI.
Well, nggak mungkin banget sih, sebenarnya, kita punya guru yang bakalan benar-benar tau kondisi kelas kita luar dalam, karena kalo di real life kita cenderung menghindari guru, ahahahahaha.
Tapi, the lack of teacher itu yang sebenarnya bisa bikin kelas berpotensi untuk amburadul.
Kalau diperhatikan sejak chapter awal-awal, yang bikin semua anak di kelas 3-E semangat itu Korosensei. Yang nyeramahin mereka pas ada anak nyebelin itu Korosensei. Yang nyadarin dan ngerubah sifat anak nyebelin itu Korosensei (Karma tuh huahaha). Jadi kalau diliat-liat si guru itu juga pegang peran penting buat keselamatan, no, kesejahteraan anak didiknya.
Oke, mungkin sampai sini bakal ada yang argumen
"Lho, kan ada BK, kan biasanya guru itu bakalan nyeramahin anak nakal gitu, tapi lihat hasilnya, nggak efektif!"
Yah, lihat dulu nyeramahinnya gimana.
Entah ya, apakah di dunia nyata beginian bisa berhasil apa enggak aku juga nggak tahu. Tapiii, gimana kalau nyeramahinnya pake cara baik-baik? Maksudku, bukan dengan "Kamu jangan ngerokok! Ngerokok bisa bikin kamu penyakitan!" tapi dengan lebih mencontohkan hasil nyata dari perbuatannya. Kalau langsung ngelarang gitu bakalan malah bikin si anak jadi makin pingin ngelakuin!
Dan bukan dengan dipanggil ke kantor dan diceramahin, tapi dengan si guru ngomongin santai macam sambil makan di kantin gitu deh.
Ah, mbulet ah.
Jadi, ini sudah hampir jam dua pagi dan aku semakin ngantuk. Ini curcolan semakin ngawur saja isinya.
Jadi, balik ke masalah kelas.
Ada satu lagi masalah yang bikin kelas jadi nggak enak. Anak pendiam! Berdasarkan referensi dari kehidupan sehari-hari, anak pendiam biasanya bakalan terus didiamkan.... teruusss dan terus hingga akhir masa sekolahnya, dan biasanya dia cuma bakalan punya beberapa teman aja, yang nggak jarang juga sama diamnya.
Gimana kalau dibikin kayak masalahnya si Okuda Manami si maniak kimia di 3-E... Dia kan pendiam tuh (yah, berdasarkan apa yang digambarkan di komiknya, sih) dan cara anak kelas 3-E buat dia nggak terlalu kuper itu dengan membuatnya bisa melebarkan sayap dengan kemampuannya, yaitu ahli kimia. Dan, yak, bisa dibilang sekarang si Okuda jadi pemasok racun-racun dan ramuan-ramuan lain buat rencana pembunuhan Korosensei.
That's another point, jangan sindir anak pendiam gara-gara diamnya. Find their skill first, then let them spread their wings.
Yah, misal ada anak pendiam gamer otaku yang suka mojok di kelas dengan headset terpasang dan mata terpaku di layar hape yang ternyata lagi muter anime ecchi terbaru //what. Eh, ternyata dia pinter fisika! Yah, jangan malah dihina gara-gara suka nonton ecchi-nya. Bikin dia merasa terbutuhkan, minta mereka ngerjain soal-soal fisika yang kita nggak paham, dan thank them for that. Ulangi cycle itu, sampai mereka ngerasa "Ah, ternyata temenku ngebutuhin aku juga."
Well, kalau itu anak nggak mau ngebuka diri juga ya berarti dia yang agakan geje. //gak
//btw itu "anak gamer otaku yang suka mojok di kelas dengan headset terpasang dan mata terpaku di layar hape yang ternyata lagi muter anime ecchi terbaru" berasal dari karangan saya semata. Tidak merujuk pada seseorang tertentu yang saya kenal.
//ngakak
Apalagi ya...
Ah, pokok intinya kelas 3-E itu keren deh. Anak-anaknya saling mensupport, they trust each other, dan yang paling penting mereka merasa nyaman sama kondisi kelas mereka walaupun belajar di gedung bobrok di tengah gunung gitu. I want that class so badly - but, well, all I can do is accepting what I have now.
Dan mereka punya Korosensei yang bisa ngesupport mereka dalam kondisi apapun dengan kekuatan Mach-nya itu. I want that kind of teacher!!
//sedot idung
Dan untuk mengakhiri post geje ini... alangkah baiknya untuk tetap sadar diri dan menyadari bahwa kelas seperti itu sangat susah untuk didapatkan....
Oyasumi ~
+ posted on 20150717 at 23:12
Hello.
I want to bring a new topic here, since I only post about negative things lately. So today I want to give a review about my Takarai Rihito's favourite works, Hana no Mizo Shiru, Check it on mangahere or mangago if you like, I just love it so much.
Ah, did I mention it before? Hana no Mizo Shiru is a BL manga :)
Well, I'm re-reading it right now (with a warm bowl of instant chicken soup by La Fonte), and I kinda want to give a review about it.
Firstly, you can check by yourself about the character, the storyline, and etc. Just google it. I just want to give my opinion about this and that, and when Misaki this and Youichi that...
Anyway, the seme is the brown haired one, Youichi and the uke is the white haired, Misaki.
When we read chapter 1, we will be greeted by Misaki's necklace.
Hana no Mizo Shiru, only the flowers know, and Misaki is so cute with the flowers! So Misaki is working on a laboratory, and he's majoring on Agricultural. Then Youichi is accidentaly know him because his friend told him about Misaki aaaaand the continue to know each other since Youichi is helping the lab with Misaki (because the Prof. there is happened to know Youichi, and since the lab needs a help with something (idk I forgot) so Youichi offers himself)
I just can't express how I love Misaki here because HE'S JUST TOO CUTE TO RESIST. Ugh, and WHO DOESN'T LOVE A WHITE HAIRED UKE, HUH???
Rihito sensei's artwork is great, a bit weird on the nose part but it's fine. I like how she draws the eye and the hair. And the hand of course, since I can't draw hands that well. I wish I can buy her art book, or her works but, yeah. my parents wont't allow it.
I bought Nakamura Asumiko sensei's Utsubora, and it happened to be rated M manga. I asked my aunt (who is living in Singapore) to buy it for me (since we don't have Kinokuniya here) and the package come with a plastic wrap (which is wrapped three times) and a R18 sticker on it. I was questioned by my parents after the book was coming. What is this book about... where do you know the mangaka... and such. Meh, I couldn't say I knew Asumiko sensei from a yaoi manga she draw!
Utsubora is a rated 18 straight manga. How about I buy a rated 15 yaoi manga? It will be a chaos.
Actually there's a lot of yaoi manga which is having a great moral value as much as straight manga does! But since it's a boy x boy relationship.... /sigh
Youichi have a bad sight, he uses lenses because his glasses isn't strong enough. His eyesight is bad enough to not recognize Misaki when they bump into each other, haha! Youichi is a nice and clumsy seme here~
ANYWAY, do I need to review the entire book here? You can read it yourself by the way!
So this is the end of the review! Ha ha ha, sorry for this useless review tho. I just in the mood to write something and re read something. But seriously guys, you need to check this manga because it just great! And check Rihito sensei's other works too! The one which is ongoing is 10 count, and it is nice too! Just check them all, hahah~
I want to bring a new topic here, since I only post about negative things lately. So today I want to give a review about my Takarai Rihito's favourite works, Hana no Mizo Shiru, Check it on mangahere or mangago if you like, I just love it so much.
Ah, did I mention it before? Hana no Mizo Shiru is a BL manga :)
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| cover on Craft |
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| the cover |
Firstly, you can check by yourself about the character, the storyline, and etc. Just google it. I just want to give my opinion about this and that, and when Misaki this and Youichi that...
Anyway, the seme is the brown haired one, Youichi and the uke is the white haired, Misaki.
When we read chapter 1, we will be greeted by Misaki's necklace.
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| who sell this anyway? I want this necklace too |
Hana no Mizo Shiru, only the flowers know, and Misaki is so cute with the flowers! So Misaki is working on a laboratory, and he's majoring on Agricultural. Then Youichi is accidentaly know him because his friend told him about Misaki aaaaand the continue to know each other since Youichi is helping the lab with Misaki (because the Prof. there is happened to know Youichi, and since the lab needs a help with something (idk I forgot) so Youichi offers himself)
I just can't express how I love Misaki here because HE'S JUST TOO CUTE TO RESIST. Ugh, and WHO DOESN'T LOVE A WHITE HAIRED UKE, HUH???
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| you should'nt be carrying this much by yourself. WELL YOUICHI HE'S A MAN TOO JUST LIKE YOU |
I bought Nakamura Asumiko sensei's Utsubora, and it happened to be rated M manga. I asked my aunt (who is living in Singapore) to buy it for me (since we don't have Kinokuniya here) and the package come with a plastic wrap (which is wrapped three times) and a R18 sticker on it. I was questioned by my parents after the book was coming. What is this book about... where do you know the mangaka... and such. Meh, I couldn't say I knew Asumiko sensei from a yaoi manga she draw!
Utsubora is a rated 18 straight manga. How about I buy a rated 15 yaoi manga? It will be a chaos.
Actually there's a lot of yaoi manga which is having a great moral value as much as straight manga does! But since it's a boy x boy relationship.... /sigh
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| anyway this is quite cliche - a bump in the train station and their things get swapped |
ANYWAY, do I need to review the entire book here? You can read it yourself by the way!
So this is the end of the review! Ha ha ha, sorry for this useless review tho. I just in the mood to write something and re read something. But seriously guys, you need to check this manga because it just great! And check Rihito sensei's other works too! The one which is ongoing is 10 count, and it is nice too! Just check them all, hahah~
Labels: japan, manga, reccomendation, review, yaoi
+ posted on 20150312 at 17:23
TONTON DISINI > http://youtu.be/88QSs0e7DEI
Karena disuruh buat review-nyaa~
Akhirnya aku buat, hitung-hitung mengisi waktu luang /eaa/
Maapkan jika komen-komen saya terlalu ngejleb, karena saya komen seenak hati... :'D
Okay, begin!
No comments~
Waktu dua anak kecil itu... Artikulasinya nggak jelas, ha ha ha. Kita nggak bisa mengandalkan anak kecil ha ha ha :) It's okay~
Dan cuma detail kecil aja, di detik 02:22 (pokok pas buka lemari) ada baju cewek... ha ha ha! Padahal itu rumah isinya dua anak cowok semua ^^
Waktu ditubruk~ Aku suka backsongnya hehehe :3
Itu beneran anda yang setir mobilnya~? Huwoo
Dan jaket itu perlu diganti sekali-kali.. Sepertinya aku sering lihat jaketnya... -_-);;
...
Itu tetep si pembunuh? Waktu nyeka mukanya itu? Jaketnya kemana? Atau bukan?
Oke, move~
Wah ada anak kerudungan ngikut membully -_-
Anyway, aku suka scene waktu mereka berempat (yang ngebully) noleh kebelakang~ xD Unyu sekali~
Di 03:55 sampai 03:59 ada anak di belakang mereka berempat, ngintip, tapi nggak nolongin! Bahaha! Lain kali dibilangin ya, ha ha :D
Dan si Sendy itu... melas banget sih... =_=
Oke, move~
Actually, I don't understand why they make a circle and then sing... Itu buat apa? Apakah itu adegan di 'old counseling room' yang dibicarakan tadi? Lebih baik dikasih penjelasan... Apa maksudnya itu, atau apa tujuan si Sendy diajak ke situ, atau tujuan mereka nyanyi, dan Deka itu yang mana! Nah.
BTW aku agak nggak setuju sama tas-tas dan jaket-jaket yang menumpuk di kursi... Kalau memang benar itu 'old counseling room' yang dibicarakan tadi, ruangan itu nggak ada kesan 'old'nya blas, ahaha.
Atau kalau aku salah menangkap maksudnya, tolong koreksi~
Itu, si faceless-man yang di detik 06:11 pakai apa? xD
Dan... di scene sebelum si faceless-man (atau slender man?) itu muncul tiba-tiba, si Sendy yang noleh keatas gara-gara ada sesuatu itu kurang jelas. Maksudku, kurang terang gitu deh. Tapi apa laptopku yang haho, ya maapkan~ :)
Lalu, yang si fac-slender man datang... Itu di percepat ya? Bukan? Ajari akuuuu ;;A;;
Pokok sekitar situ kekurangan cahaya deh.
Oke, move~
Wah, itu sengaja di 'oren'kan ya, biar ganti suasana ke 'biru'nya jelas... /abaikan komen nggak jelas ini/
Dan, maafkan aku, tapi aku ketawa di bagian tulisan-tulisan itu.... :')
MAAF BANGET.
Waktu si Sendy ngomong di sekitar 08:01... itu Dubbing ya? :D Kedengaran berbeda banget soalnya.
Tulisan yang kedua font-nya beda...
Ah, jadi ingat Jack Frost :' /abaikan/
Di sekitar 08:15 sampai 09:00, audionya agak ada noise-nya... Apa memang dibuat seperti itu? Atau (lagi-lagi) laptopku yang error? Kalau iya, maaf~
Dan tangan itu HORROR (y)
Oke, move~
Waktu di ruang BK yang kedua... Itu backsong-nya ngedownload atau ngerekam sendiri? Sasuga soalnya, audionya pakai teknik apalah itu, jadi kalau pakai headphone bisa kanan-kiri beda~
Kalau ngerekam sendiri, kasih tau laaaah~~
Scene sekitar 10:14 audionya juga agak banyak noise-nya ^^
Itu nutup pintunya pakai apaah? xD
Dan~ waktu adegan si slender-man nyekik si...si gendut /eh/ itu kenapa temen-temennya di belakang nggak lari? Justru waktu ketahuan kalau itu si Sendy mereka pada menjauh... Atau itu maunya dari awal mereka memang lihatnya itu sebagai Sendy? Tapi kenapa mereka lari waktu di kamar?
Oke, move~
Eh, ini padang rumput yang buat Afterword itu ya~
Anyway, setelah si Sendy jatuh di padang rumput(?), itu dibawa ke kamarnya ya? Atau ke klinik? Nggak ada bantalnya ya? Yang lihat agak nggak enak sih.
Masa sudah seminggu tapi nggak ada bantal dan selimut...
Dan, apakah ada maksud tertentu dia nyari si Slendy di hutan(?) itu?
Oh, mayatnya ding ya. Lupa, lupa, maap.
Si Slendy-nya itu perlu dibenahi penutup mukanya~ :3
Kenapa nggak pakai topeng putih itu saja? Nggak ada yang punya ya? Ya nggak apa-apa sih, cuma, perlu dibenahi sedikit saja 'bungkusannya' itu.
Aku suka waktu ditarik! Waaa~~
Dan waktu jatuh di tempat tidur itu jugaa~~ Sasuga sekali *w*
Yang agak mengganjal itu waktu mbaknya masuk, dan bilang 'kamu sedang apa?' (atau kamu kenapa entahlah) terus tiba-tiba duduk gitu aja di sampingnya...
Waktu antara dia tanya dan dia ikutan diam itu terlalu dekat. Kalau misalnya mbaknya itu duduk diam karena pengertian atau sejenisnya, mending dikasih satu scene lagi yang nunjukin dia tanya-tanya terus, pas gak dijawab-jawab, akhirnya ngikut diam...~
Dan~ Selesai!
Bagus~~
BAGUS~~ ;;A;;
Cuma si slender man nari-nari itu gaje sangat.... ._.
Eit,
Slendy's Lullaby...?
BIKIN SENDIRI? ;;A;;
+ posted on 20131119 at 11:57
Karena dipaksa diminta buat nge-review, saya akhirnya nge-review! Yah, saya tidak keberatan kok ^^ Hanya saja maafkan komentar saya yang sok professional padahal enggak ini = ='' Ini akibatnya kebanyakan nonton film dan sering komen disana-sini...
Ohiya, yang belum nonton, nih saya kasih link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=efUP3pLi11g ^^ Copas sendiri yaa~~
Kalau begitu langsung saja, review time! ^^
Caution: Saya streaming You Tube karena mau download HD lama banget dan saya sudah nggak sabar mau liat - -v Segala kritikan yang mungkin disebabkan oleh Yutub mohon diabaikan~ ^^
Opening-nya mau dikomen nih? Nggak usah ya? Unyuh kok ^^
00:36 - 01:26 Kameranya lebih stabil sedikit ya~ ^^
01:26 Itu satu kelas (itu bukan kelas kayaknya - -v Itu ruang kesenian kalo gak salah, ya nggak sih?) ujian kan? Itu kelihatan ada laptop kebuka dan satu ruangan nggak keisi penuh~
Ohiya, gurunya harusnya ganti baju sekalian dums.... Tapi ya nggak apa-apa sih, ini buat tugas kan ya?
01:52 - 01:54 Posisi kertas yang dilempar berubah!! XD Ini sih gak mungkin bisa sama ya - -v Abaikan yang ini kalau begitu.
02:10 Itu nunggu kameramen teriak 'Action' baru sepedanya dijalanin ya? :o
02: 29 Zooming-nya perlu dihaluskan lagi~
Aduh, saya terkaget-kaget silaunya lampu~ /abaikan/ Itu koran tipis banget yak - -v
Di 03:08 itu kan si 'Mama' lagi ngebuka sepatu, tapi frame selanjutnya langsung lagi BBan. Harusnya di kelihatanin tuh pas lagi ngambil BB~ Dan suaranya... (Ini bukan film karya Tim Burton jadi ya gak apa apa sih... Saya juga pasti bakalan gitu - -v) Kerasan si Mama ketimbang si Papa ^^
Dan aktingnya oke~ Meskipun intonasinya saya agak nggak enak aja - -v. Si Papa melas banget nggak punya uang :v
Tangan si Mama sekitar 03:49 - 03:51 berubah posisi~
Korannya! Kelihatan banget nih! Korannya ngilang! 03:38 si Papa ngelipet koran kan, terus di 03:56 ada lagi! Di 03:57 udah ilang lagi! Jaraknya cuma satu detik padahal. Itu perlu diperhatikan ya~ Soalnya koran besar sih. Kalau posisi tangan gitu palingan juga nggak ada yang nyadar. Terus di bagian situ juga, masa si Papa nggak merhatiin si Mama pas ngomong. Matanya malah jelalatan kemana mana tuh :v
"Ayah pulang~"
Kayaknya waktu shoot pas dateng tadi nggak malem-malem amat yak?
Itu si ayah kepanasan, kipas angin nganggur kok nggak dihadepin ke dia aja~ (04:34)
04: 50 Ada gangguan teknis kecil!
Oh iya deeenggg~~ << Gw ngakak beneran pas ini wkwk. Bagus juga tuh idenya, langsung pasang muka serius gitu :p
05:32 Itu komputer harusnya idup! Ya nggak apa-apa sih... Cuma kalo nggak idup nggak seru~ Dan teknik pengambilan gambar perlu di-improve lagi~ Kelihatannya nggak enak aja pas 05:44. Saya sendiri stuck kalau urusan posisi tapi yah, pokok perlu dirapikan~ ^^ Yang ngomong itu kepalanya jadi kepotong...
06:00 Proposal kagak dibuka/dibaca noh? :o
06:03 (kayaknya lho!) Biasanya kalau ngitung uang buat begituan ya nggak terang-terangan gitu juga kali - -v Masa ngehitung uang langsung di depannya yang minta dana. Better kalau agak kebawah... Di sebelah laci itu mungkin, biar nge-shootnya juga bisa...
06:23 Tangannya unyu... /ABAIKAN/
06:44 - 06:45 Cepet banget pindahnya... Kayaknya waktu 06:44 masih ada di dekat pintu, tapi di -6:45 langsung di deketnya kursi...
Dan apaan itu Adrian Ganteng = = No komen kalau itu~
Itu ruangan sepi banget ya ^^
07:14 Ini lagi! Ngitung jangan di depan yang minta dong - -v Tapi uangnya banyak bener... Uang SPP sapa aja tuh? :o
Bupati Jember tahun 2222? Amin deh ^^
Di bagian sini... Kepala kepotong itu agak mengganggu.... Tapi kalau penuh juga kayaknya agak janggal ya... - -v
08:24 Ngasihin kertas harusnya nggak gitu dong, apalagi sama yang jabatannya lebih tinggi~
08:47 Zooming~~
08:56 - 08:57 Itu hasil penggabungan 2 video ya...?
09:15 Itu baju kenapa... - -v
Eh itu filming dimana? Unyu banget tempatnya :D
10:20 Mbaknya pake Crocs! :D Dan nggeletek itu denah pembangunannya smasa?
10:38 Kadesnya awkward banget bedirinya... /abaikan/ Dan itu mbak Mahsa! ^^
11:08 Kurang naik angle kameranya... Kepala si Kades kepotong... Atau memang dibuat kayak gitu?
11:13 - 11:14 Perbedaan kualitas! Ini yang di film sebelumnya juga sedikit jadi masalah. Tapi ya mau gimana lagi... Kita nggak bisa buat jembatan beneran runtuh terus di-shoot sih u,u Tapi retaknya kece! :D
Sfx-nya ini dapet dari manaa... OwO
Pergantian frame (beneran frame-ya namanya?) pas jembatan ambruk dan Subuh TV ini kurang halus~ Dan lumayan ambigu... "Seperti Seharusnya"...
Berita ini juga, pembawa acaranya kepalanya jangan kepotong dong ^^ Coba deh lihat di berita-berita. Terus kesannya kameranya di bagian berita ini miring. Dan mbaknya... jangan merengut dong :p Pembawa berita meskipun serius kudu senyum juga ^^ Dan Acer-nya itu biasanya di sensor..
Ohiya, di 12:34, itu kan ceritanya si pembawa acara ngejelasin beritanya tuh. Biasanya kalau gitu di close-up, nggak sampai sejauh itu nge-zoom-nya. Dan kursi kosong di sampingnya itu sebaiknya disingkirkan saja. Kalau kursi itu buat keperluan interview, bisa dong, dibuat nggak kelihatan ^^ Atau dibuat nge-close up aja, biar sekalian nggak keliatan ^^
Reporternya juga emotionless - -v
Di 13:10, ngambil gambarnya kurang keatas! Dan namanya kan Mahsa, jangan dipanggil Acha dong. Iya kalau yang ngerti, kalau yang enggak? ^^ Tapi ini buat konsumsi smasa doang kan ya, jadi ya pasti yang nonton juga sudah tahu kalau Acha itu panggilannya mbak Mahsa (paling :p) Tapi kalau untuk konsumsi umum, jangan diulangi ya~
13:36 Harusnya si ibu Acha ngilang! Jangan kena shoot~ Atau kalau kena shoot, pengambilan untuk narasumber kedua sedikit lebih jauh dong ^^
Narasumber kedua di 13:49 liat contekan dialog di tangan! Bahaha! Dan masih banyak adegan-adegan dimana mbaknya liat contekan ^^ Dihafalkan ya~ Dan harusnya buat narasumber kedua ini sikapnya menyalahkan pemerintah atau malah melas melas minta sumbangan lagi buat diperbaiki. Aktingnya perlu di-improve~
Dan sekitaran situ juga, waktu si narasumber ngomong itu, harusnya di close-up dia...
"Sungguh benar-benar dipertanyakan" itu lumayan mengganggu... ^^
Btw yang dibelakang itu ngapain?? = =v
Dan harusnya sebelum balik lagi ke ruang siaran, si reporter harusnya bilang "Demikian laporan dari kami, saya blabla dan blabla melaporkan dari TKP, kembali ke anda, blabla.."
^^ Biasanya di TV juga gitu kan~
14:46 itu jadi kayak iklan Acer... Itu laptop kurang ke tengah... Jangan nutupin si mbak.
BTW, si pakar itu pakai seragam ya :D Kelihatan sedikit nametagnya dari balik jas ^^
Suaranya kurang jelas ya~
16:07 - 16:17 Suaranya jangan kalah keras sama backsong dong ^^
Dan ide di 16:18 itu keren~
Dan habisnya itu ada suara-suara itu, itu orang demo ya? Si Mama kok tenang-tenang aja... Harusnya 'kan "Pah, ada apaan tuhh??"
Pengambilan gambar waktu "maap ma, papa kudu ngacir" itu bagus! Cuma keganggu lampu aja - -v
Papa sayang mama ecieh :v
Dan btw, si Kades tinggal di Mushola tuh? :v
Ending:
Oho, ini teasernya ya~ Efek mata biru itu keren! /tepuk tangan/ Gimana cara buatnyaaa~!
Daaan, selesaaaai~
/tepuk tangan/ prok prok prok!
Keseluruhan filmnya oke banget kok! Maafkan komenan saya yang nggak genah ini /bow/ Komenan kayak yang bisa bikin ginian aja, padahal kagak :v
Maafkan jika ada tutur kata yang kurang mengena dan abaikan yang ada tanda /abaikan/ !! ^^
Saya tunggu part 2-nya~ ^^
#end
Ohiya, yang belum nonton, nih saya kasih link : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=efUP3pLi11g ^^ Copas sendiri yaa~~
Kalau begitu langsung saja, review time! ^^
Caution: Saya streaming You Tube karena mau download HD lama banget dan saya sudah nggak sabar mau liat - -v Segala kritikan yang mungkin disebabkan oleh Yutub mohon diabaikan~ ^^
Opening-nya mau dikomen nih? Nggak usah ya? Unyuh kok ^^
00:36 - 01:26 Kameranya lebih stabil sedikit ya~ ^^
01:26 Itu satu kelas (itu bukan kelas kayaknya - -v Itu ruang kesenian kalo gak salah, ya nggak sih?) ujian kan? Itu kelihatan ada laptop kebuka dan satu ruangan nggak keisi penuh~
Ohiya, gurunya harusnya ganti baju sekalian dums.... Tapi ya nggak apa-apa sih, ini buat tugas kan ya?
01:52 - 01:54 Posisi kertas yang dilempar berubah!! XD Ini sih gak mungkin bisa sama ya - -v Abaikan yang ini kalau begitu.
02:10 Itu nunggu kameramen teriak 'Action' baru sepedanya dijalanin ya? :o
02: 29 Zooming-nya perlu dihaluskan lagi~
Aduh, saya terkaget-kaget silaunya lampu~ /abaikan/ Itu koran tipis banget yak - -v
Di 03:08 itu kan si 'Mama' lagi ngebuka sepatu, tapi frame selanjutnya langsung lagi BBan. Harusnya di kelihatanin tuh pas lagi ngambil BB~ Dan suaranya... (Ini bukan film karya Tim Burton jadi ya gak apa apa sih... Saya juga pasti bakalan gitu - -v) Kerasan si Mama ketimbang si Papa ^^
Dan aktingnya oke~ Meskipun intonasinya saya agak nggak enak aja - -v. Si Papa melas banget nggak punya uang :v
Tangan si Mama sekitar 03:49 - 03:51 berubah posisi~
Korannya! Kelihatan banget nih! Korannya ngilang! 03:38 si Papa ngelipet koran kan, terus di 03:56 ada lagi! Di 03:57 udah ilang lagi! Jaraknya cuma satu detik padahal. Itu perlu diperhatikan ya~ Soalnya koran besar sih. Kalau posisi tangan gitu palingan juga nggak ada yang nyadar. Terus di bagian situ juga, masa si Papa nggak merhatiin si Mama pas ngomong. Matanya malah jelalatan kemana mana tuh :v
"Ayah pulang~"
Kayaknya waktu shoot pas dateng tadi nggak malem-malem amat yak?
Itu si ayah kepanasan, kipas angin nganggur kok nggak dihadepin ke dia aja~ (04:34)
04: 50 Ada gangguan teknis kecil!
Oh iya deeenggg~~ << Gw ngakak beneran pas ini wkwk. Bagus juga tuh idenya, langsung pasang muka serius gitu :p
05:32 Itu komputer harusnya idup! Ya nggak apa-apa sih... Cuma kalo nggak idup nggak seru~ Dan teknik pengambilan gambar perlu di-improve lagi~ Kelihatannya nggak enak aja pas 05:44. Saya sendiri stuck kalau urusan posisi tapi yah, pokok perlu dirapikan~ ^^ Yang ngomong itu kepalanya jadi kepotong...
06:00 Proposal kagak dibuka/dibaca noh? :o
06:03 (kayaknya lho!) Biasanya kalau ngitung uang buat begituan ya nggak terang-terangan gitu juga kali - -v Masa ngehitung uang langsung di depannya yang minta dana. Better kalau agak kebawah... Di sebelah laci itu mungkin, biar nge-shootnya juga bisa...
06:23 Tangannya unyu... /ABAIKAN/
06:44 - 06:45 Cepet banget pindahnya... Kayaknya waktu 06:44 masih ada di dekat pintu, tapi di -6:45 langsung di deketnya kursi...
Dan apaan itu Adrian Ganteng = = No komen kalau itu~
Itu ruangan sepi banget ya ^^
07:14 Ini lagi! Ngitung jangan di depan yang minta dong - -v Tapi uangnya banyak bener... Uang SPP sapa aja tuh? :o
Bupati Jember tahun 2222? Amin deh ^^
Di bagian sini... Kepala kepotong itu agak mengganggu.... Tapi kalau penuh juga kayaknya agak janggal ya... - -v
08:24 Ngasihin kertas harusnya nggak gitu dong, apalagi sama yang jabatannya lebih tinggi~
08:47 Zooming~~
08:56 - 08:57 Itu hasil penggabungan 2 video ya...?
09:15 Itu baju kenapa... - -v
Eh itu filming dimana? Unyu banget tempatnya :D
10:20 Mbaknya pake Crocs! :D Dan nggeletek itu denah pembangunannya smasa?
10:38 Kadesnya awkward banget bedirinya... /abaikan/ Dan itu mbak Mahsa! ^^
11:08 Kurang naik angle kameranya... Kepala si Kades kepotong... Atau memang dibuat kayak gitu?
11:13 - 11:14 Perbedaan kualitas! Ini yang di film sebelumnya juga sedikit jadi masalah. Tapi ya mau gimana lagi... Kita nggak bisa buat jembatan beneran runtuh terus di-shoot sih u,u Tapi retaknya kece! :D
Sfx-nya ini dapet dari manaa... OwO
Pergantian frame (beneran frame-ya namanya?) pas jembatan ambruk dan Subuh TV ini kurang halus~ Dan lumayan ambigu... "Seperti Seharusnya"...
Berita ini juga, pembawa acaranya kepalanya jangan kepotong dong ^^ Coba deh lihat di berita-berita. Terus kesannya kameranya di bagian berita ini miring. Dan mbaknya... jangan merengut dong :p Pembawa berita meskipun serius kudu senyum juga ^^ Dan Acer-nya itu biasanya di sensor..
Ohiya, di 12:34, itu kan ceritanya si pembawa acara ngejelasin beritanya tuh. Biasanya kalau gitu di close-up, nggak sampai sejauh itu nge-zoom-nya. Dan kursi kosong di sampingnya itu sebaiknya disingkirkan saja. Kalau kursi itu buat keperluan interview, bisa dong, dibuat nggak kelihatan ^^ Atau dibuat nge-close up aja, biar sekalian nggak keliatan ^^
Reporternya juga emotionless - -v
Di 13:10, ngambil gambarnya kurang keatas! Dan namanya kan Mahsa, jangan dipanggil Acha dong. Iya kalau yang ngerti, kalau yang enggak? ^^ Tapi ini buat konsumsi smasa doang kan ya, jadi ya pasti yang nonton juga sudah tahu kalau Acha itu panggilannya mbak Mahsa (paling :p) Tapi kalau untuk konsumsi umum, jangan diulangi ya~
13:36 Harusnya si ibu Acha ngilang! Jangan kena shoot~ Atau kalau kena shoot, pengambilan untuk narasumber kedua sedikit lebih jauh dong ^^
Narasumber kedua di 13:49 liat contekan dialog di tangan! Bahaha! Dan masih banyak adegan-adegan dimana mbaknya liat contekan ^^ Dihafalkan ya~ Dan harusnya buat narasumber kedua ini sikapnya menyalahkan pemerintah atau malah melas melas minta sumbangan lagi buat diperbaiki. Aktingnya perlu di-improve~
Dan sekitaran situ juga, waktu si narasumber ngomong itu, harusnya di close-up dia...
"Sungguh benar-benar dipertanyakan" itu lumayan mengganggu... ^^
Btw yang dibelakang itu ngapain?? = =v
Dan harusnya sebelum balik lagi ke ruang siaran, si reporter harusnya bilang "Demikian laporan dari kami, saya blabla dan blabla melaporkan dari TKP, kembali ke anda, blabla.."
^^ Biasanya di TV juga gitu kan~
14:46 itu jadi kayak iklan Acer... Itu laptop kurang ke tengah... Jangan nutupin si mbak.
BTW, si pakar itu pakai seragam ya :D Kelihatan sedikit nametagnya dari balik jas ^^
Suaranya kurang jelas ya~
16:07 - 16:17 Suaranya jangan kalah keras sama backsong dong ^^
Dan ide di 16:18 itu keren~
Dan habisnya itu ada suara-suara itu, itu orang demo ya? Si Mama kok tenang-tenang aja... Harusnya 'kan "Pah, ada apaan tuhh??"
Pengambilan gambar waktu "maap ma, papa kudu ngacir" itu bagus! Cuma keganggu lampu aja - -v
Papa sayang mama ecieh :v
Dan btw, si Kades tinggal di Mushola tuh? :v
Ending:
Oho, ini teasernya ya~ Efek mata biru itu keren! /tepuk tangan/ Gimana cara buatnyaaa~!
Daaan, selesaaaai~
/tepuk tangan/ prok prok prok!
Keseluruhan filmnya oke banget kok! Maafkan komenan saya yang nggak genah ini /bow/ Komenan kayak yang bisa bikin ginian aja, padahal kagak :v
Maafkan jika ada tutur kata yang kurang mengena dan abaikan yang ada tanda /abaikan/ !! ^^
Saya tunggu part 2-nya~ ^^
#end
+ posted on 20130510 at 14:32
Check film-nya guys, di sini : SINI MEN~
Dan review-nyaa!!! XD
Sebenarnya aku rada sebel juga nggak bisa ikutan, tapi ya mau gimana lagi - -'' Saya sedang berada di belahan dunia lain pada saat itu u,u
Dan berhubung yang buat minta komen, sekalian aja aku buat post disini. Hitung-hitung menuh-menuhin blog :)
Maafkan kalau ada tutur kata salah karena aku adalah orang awam yang seenaknya nge-review tanpa mempedulikan derajat dan posisi(??)
Dan review ini hanya berdasarkan pengelihatan saya~
CAUTION: waktu nge-review saya pakai streaming Yutub.
First, opening dengan gabungan video dari yutub itu keren! Cuma, resolusi(?) antara video yutub dan video yang direkam sendiri itu perlu diperhatiin. Perbedaan kualitas videonya itu lho. Atau memang sengaja dibuat begitu? But, this concept is cool XD
Then, suara naratornya! Entah kenapa aku merasa agak aneh. Bukannya nggak jelas, tapi volume backsong-nya itu dikecilin dong (00:40 - 01:11) Selain itu semua oke :)
Second, pas bagian rumput-rumput itu (01:41) dan selanjutnya sampai (02:02) itu ngambil videonya di-zoom in kah? Soalnya agak nggak jelas. Atau memang ini Yutub aja yang rada error, atau kesalahan teknis? Entahlah. Atau mungkin karena terlalu terang...?
Then, pas yang megang-megang Mimosa pudica itu *efek pel. Biologi* siapa ya? Masih si kembar itu? Terus yang megang kupu-kupu itu, dan kucing itu... Terus tiba-tiba objeknya ganti ke anak kecil cowok-cewek dua di awal itu. Kalau memang ganti objek, kasih tahu dong. Misalnya video pas megang kucing itu yang si anak kecil dua itu, perlihatkan kalau memang mereka berdua yang pegang. Karena perbedaan tangan nggak bisa dijadikan patokan! Tangan di awal aja sudah beda sama objek yang lari-lari unyuh di depan itu....
Third, saat pergantian usia itu (03:35) itu kan ada ledakan, entah kenapa video putihnya(?) kelamaan. Harusnya tampilin juga keadaan pas sebelum ledakan itu beberapa detik aja deh. Jadi pas narator bilang "Tetapi alam berkehendak lain"-atau apalah itu, subtitle-nya dibuat kayak gini:
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itu di efek typewriter. Sori kalo nggak jelas. Ini capture-an dari MV G-Dragon yang That XX detik ke 01:29, silahkan dicek sendiri biar lebih jelas.
Nah, setelah kayak gini baru ledakannya. Duar-duar-duar itu dan serangkaian video itu :)
Fourth, pas pergantian dari video yutub ke video-rekam-sendiri itu (03:54) maunya dari 'langit yang sama' gitu tah? Kalau iya, editannya kurang halus :) Tapi kalau nggak ya, nggak tahu saya. Aku tahu, ngedit video 10 menit itu SUSAH *pengalaman video dokumenter* tapi saya hanya me-review. Jangan marah, jaaaaa!!!
Dan dilanjutkan dengan si main character yang mendadak muncul dari samping. Itu maunya mereka kaget gara-gara ledakan itu atau gimana? Saya sedikit nggak ngerti.
Dan disekitar detik itu, suara naratornya tenggelam sama backsong lagi.
Dan, *terlalu banyak 'dan' disiniiii* kalau saya boleh komplain, itu ada sepeda motor nongol dibelakang merekaaaaaaa!! Sesuatu berwarna orange di gudang(?) itu juga mengganggu warna! Atau kalian *tim editor maksud saya* memang brmaksud ngasih itu oren-oren disitu... ya saya nggak ikut-ikut.
Fifth, saya komplain pemburunya tuh. Mukanya terlalu baik men! Dan kenapa dia sendirian? Pas aku liat pertama kali di second premiere (apalah), pemburu itu sosok besar dari si kembar itu ya? Si Paperplane twin boy? Mereka selalu bareng, kenapa pas memburu si main chara itu dia cuma sendirian...? (Meskipun muka nggak sama persis) tapi tampilin mereka berdua dong. Penonton jadinya bingung kan :p
Lalu, di sekitar 04:55 itu, si main-chara cowok (sapa sih namanya???!) itu ngelempar batu atau apalah itu ke arah si pemburu-muka-baik itu ya? Si pemburu masih jauh, kawan, kalian lari aja langsung si pemburu juga nggak bakalan bisa ngejar :p Wong dia jalan men, bukan lari. Atau kalau diperlihatkan jarak antara si pemburu dan si victim(??), ngelempar batu sih, nggak apa-apa. Dan kayaknya si Haru pas itu nggak ada panik-paniknya sama sekali - -
Oh, wakarimasu! Si kembarannya paperplane boy itu sudah ada di belakang sana, nungguin victim mereka! Jadi mereka kerja sama gitu ya? Bagus, bagus. Tapi kemunculannya pas sebelum perang(?) itu pendek sekali... Bahkan mukanya nggak keliatan. Tapi sepertinya itu memang purpose mukanya nggak dikelihtankan ya...
Then, saya mau komentar backsong lagi. Harusnya lebih mencekam dong - -'' Atau emang mau dibuat kayak gitu, ya...? Karena saat itu sama sekali nggak ada serem-seremnya (emang bukan film serem kali!). Dua orang pendekar sakti *eh* itu siapa ya? Relasi sang victim? Dan kenapa victimnya nggak ikutan nyerang? Kalo keroyokan 'kan pasti menang *ala indonesia bok,*
Dan minna, harap tingkatkan kemampuan akting perang kalian *bow* Aku nggak mau komplain soal itu karena aku sendiri mungkin bakal lebih jelek daripada itu!!
Lalu tullisan-tulisan berjalan itu... Terlalu cepat, tim editor! Atau memang sengaja? Aku males mau baca jadi.
Pas pemburu kedua-nya mati, pemburu satu-nya kok nggak ada frustasi-frustasinyya gitu ya, mukanya *facepalm* Dia tetap saja datar dan expressionless - -
Dan lagi-lagi suara narator yang tenggelam.
Yang perang, oy, pendekar dua sakti itu! Wardrobe perlu diperhatikan! Paling nggak pakai baju yang polos kek, atau pakai seragam gitu. Masa yang perang pakai baju motif doraemon??
Dan pas bagian perang itu, di sekitar situ kan banyak orang (06:41) kok nggak dibantuin? Kok nggak denger ada keributan diluar?
Yah, kalau kru film beneran emang bisa ngusir mereka sebentar sih, tapi ini 'kan holiday project.... Sudahlah, Alice, nggak usah mendetail..... - -
Tim make up! *ada nggak?* itu pas jatuh kasih efek dong. Apa kek, luka kek, merah-merah....
Sixth, pas 07:17 itu harusnya backsong-nya langsung ilang barengan sama kotoran hitam yang terbang ke arah kamera itu. Dan baru di 07:21, pas gambarnya ada lagi, backsong-nya muncul lagi dengan efek ngagetin gitu. Ohiya, di bagian ini aku prefer ada suara langkah kaki mereka pas lari di daun-daun. Dan sekali-sekali kalau bikin dengan tema yang sama, kameramennnya ikutan lari bareng mereka dong. Atau videonya diambil dari depan. Biar ada variasi dan ekspresi mereka kelihatan :)
Di 07:39, harusnya si cowok liat ke arah si cewek dong. Masa jalan susah gitu temennya dibiarin dibelakang? Cewek lagi.
Dan di 07:46 berhentinya terlalu tiba-tiba. Haru jadi kayak "ah, ini kan pas scene capek itu!" jadi dia berhenti. Jadi kayak dipaksa! Harusnya si cewek berhenti agak jauhan di belakangnya gitu. Secara, dia cewek, jadi fisiknya nggak lebih kuat dari si cowok kan? Apalagi udah lari-lari sepanjang itu.
Oh, wakarimasu. Jaraknya deket biar pas ketembak si cowok bisa langsung nangkep si cewek 'kan? Bisa aja dibuat si cowok lari kebelakang gitu, biar lebih dramatis *apane* tapi kalau adegan kayak gitu harus latian biar timing jatuhnya pas. Jadi nggak jatuh ke tanah.
Dan pas si pemburu dateng, si cowok itu kan nembak tuh (07:57) Dapet darimana men?? Sudah ada dari awal? Kenapa nggak dipake buat nembak daritadi aja? Jadi dua pendekar sakti itu nggak perlu mati 'kan? Lalu kemana perginya pistol itu? Nggak ada scene si cowok ngebuang pistolnya. Mau dimasukin saku? Apa nggak panas...?
Oh, ternyata ada adegannya ding. Tapi ngelihatnya kudu jelas.... Jadi sebaiknya scene itu diambil dari angle tertentu jadi pas adegan buang pistolnya kelihatan :)
Waktu si cewek habis ketembak, dia nggak kelihatan kesakitan atau apalah. Dan kelihatan kayak dibimbing jalan, bukannya dibantuin jalan. Dan kesannya disuruh berbaring, bukan 'dipersilahkan' berbaring.
Lalu pas scene 08:07, si cowok megang kedua bahunya si cewek. Apa nggak sakit ya? 'kan habis ketembak? Atau ketembaknya bukan di bahu? Di lengan? Entahlah.
Dan Haru sempat ngelirik ke kamera pas 08:15.
Dan jarak mereka berdua terlalu dekat. Maksudku, ada scene si cewek nggenggam tangan si cowok kan? Dia sampai ngangkat tangannya gitu. Itu agak mengganjal menurutku....
Di 08:30, si cewek nggak nggenggam betul tangan cowknya - - Chemistry diantara kalian berdua kurang ah...
Dan bunga itu perumpamaan si cewek mati *eh* ya? Keren XD
Pas si cewek udah mati... Dan cowoknya frustasi... Kenapa nggak diperlihatkan ekspresi wajahnya...? Frustasinya kurang ah...
Pemikiran video flashback itu bagus! XD
Dan pemilihan backsong untuk ending bagus :)
Dan review saya berakhir! Gyaaah! Gyaaah!
Maafkan kalau bahasa saya kurang berkenan di hati anda semuaaaa!!
Aku tahu dan sangat mengerti kalau buat film itu susah, aku cuma review.... Jangan marah, jaaaaaa??
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Last, thank you for u'r attention...~
#end
Dan review-nyaa!!! XD
Sebenarnya aku rada sebel juga nggak bisa ikutan, tapi ya mau gimana lagi - -'' Saya sedang berada di belahan dunia lain pada saat itu u,u
Dan berhubung yang buat minta komen, sekalian aja aku buat post disini. Hitung-hitung menuh-menuhin blog :)
Maafkan kalau ada tutur kata salah karena aku adalah orang awam yang seenaknya nge-review tanpa mempedulikan derajat dan posisi(??)
Dan review ini hanya berdasarkan pengelihatan saya~
CAUTION: waktu nge-review saya pakai streaming Yutub.
First, opening dengan gabungan video dari yutub itu keren! Cuma, resolusi(?) antara video yutub dan video yang direkam sendiri itu perlu diperhatiin. Perbedaan kualitas videonya itu lho. Atau memang sengaja dibuat begitu? But, this concept is cool XD
Then, suara naratornya! Entah kenapa aku merasa agak aneh. Bukannya nggak jelas, tapi volume backsong-nya itu dikecilin dong (00:40 - 01:11) Selain itu semua oke :)
Second, pas bagian rumput-rumput itu (01:41) dan selanjutnya sampai (02:02) itu ngambil videonya di-zoom in kah? Soalnya agak nggak jelas. Atau memang ini Yutub aja yang rada error, atau kesalahan teknis? Entahlah. Atau mungkin karena terlalu terang...?
Then, pas yang megang-megang Mimosa pudica itu *efek pel. Biologi* siapa ya? Masih si kembar itu? Terus yang megang kupu-kupu itu, dan kucing itu... Terus tiba-tiba objeknya ganti ke anak kecil cowok-cewek dua di awal itu. Kalau memang ganti objek, kasih tahu dong. Misalnya video pas megang kucing itu yang si anak kecil dua itu, perlihatkan kalau memang mereka berdua yang pegang. Karena perbedaan tangan nggak bisa dijadikan patokan! Tangan di awal aja sudah beda sama objek yang lari-lari unyuh di depan itu....
Third, saat pergantian usia itu (03:35) itu kan ada ledakan, entah kenapa video putihnya(?) kelamaan. Harusnya tampilin juga keadaan pas sebelum ledakan itu beberapa detik aja deh. Jadi pas narator bilang "Tetapi alam berkehendak lain"-atau apalah itu, subtitle-nya dibuat kayak gini:
+M+V+(HD).mp4_000089631.jpg)
itu di efek typewriter. Sori kalo nggak jelas. Ini capture-an dari MV G-Dragon yang That XX detik ke 01:29, silahkan dicek sendiri biar lebih jelas.
Nah, setelah kayak gini baru ledakannya. Duar-duar-duar itu dan serangkaian video itu :)
Fourth, pas pergantian dari video yutub ke video-rekam-sendiri itu (03:54) maunya dari 'langit yang sama' gitu tah? Kalau iya, editannya kurang halus :) Tapi kalau nggak ya, nggak tahu saya. Aku tahu, ngedit video 10 menit itu SUSAH *pengalaman video dokumenter* tapi saya hanya me-review. Jangan marah, jaaaaa!!!
Dan dilanjutkan dengan si main character yang mendadak muncul dari samping. Itu maunya mereka kaget gara-gara ledakan itu atau gimana? Saya sedikit nggak ngerti.
Dan disekitar detik itu, suara naratornya tenggelam sama backsong lagi.
Dan, *terlalu banyak 'dan' disiniiii* kalau saya boleh komplain, itu ada sepeda motor nongol dibelakang merekaaaaaaa!! Sesuatu berwarna orange di gudang(?) itu juga mengganggu warna! Atau kalian *tim editor maksud saya* memang brmaksud ngasih itu oren-oren disitu... ya saya nggak ikut-ikut.
Fifth, saya komplain pemburunya tuh. Mukanya terlalu baik men! Dan kenapa dia sendirian? Pas aku liat pertama kali di second premiere (apalah), pemburu itu sosok besar dari si kembar itu ya? Si Paperplane twin boy? Mereka selalu bareng, kenapa pas memburu si main chara itu dia cuma sendirian...? (Meskipun muka nggak sama persis) tapi tampilin mereka berdua dong. Penonton jadinya bingung kan :p
Lalu, di sekitar 04:55 itu, si main-chara cowok (sapa sih namanya???!) itu ngelempar batu atau apalah itu ke arah si pemburu-muka-baik itu ya? Si pemburu masih jauh, kawan, kalian lari aja langsung si pemburu juga nggak bakalan bisa ngejar :p Wong dia jalan men, bukan lari. Atau kalau diperlihatkan jarak antara si pemburu dan si victim(??), ngelempar batu sih, nggak apa-apa. Dan kayaknya si Haru pas itu nggak ada panik-paniknya sama sekali - -
Oh, wakarimasu! Si kembarannya paperplane boy itu sudah ada di belakang sana, nungguin victim mereka! Jadi mereka kerja sama gitu ya? Bagus, bagus. Tapi kemunculannya pas sebelum perang(?) itu pendek sekali... Bahkan mukanya nggak keliatan. Tapi sepertinya itu memang purpose mukanya nggak dikelihtankan ya...
Then, saya mau komentar backsong lagi. Harusnya lebih mencekam dong - -'' Atau emang mau dibuat kayak gitu, ya...? Karena saat itu sama sekali nggak ada serem-seremnya (emang bukan film serem kali!). Dua orang pendekar sakti *eh* itu siapa ya? Relasi sang victim? Dan kenapa victimnya nggak ikutan nyerang? Kalo keroyokan 'kan pasti menang *ala indonesia bok,*
Dan minna, harap tingkatkan kemampuan akting perang kalian *bow* Aku nggak mau komplain soal itu karena aku sendiri mungkin bakal lebih jelek daripada itu!!
Lalu tullisan-tulisan berjalan itu... Terlalu cepat, tim editor! Atau memang sengaja? Aku males mau baca jadi.
Pas pemburu kedua-nya mati, pemburu satu-nya kok nggak ada frustasi-frustasinyya gitu ya, mukanya *facepalm* Dia tetap saja datar dan expressionless - -
Dan lagi-lagi suara narator yang tenggelam.
Yang perang, oy, pendekar dua sakti itu! Wardrobe perlu diperhatikan! Paling nggak pakai baju yang polos kek, atau pakai seragam gitu. Masa yang perang pakai baju motif doraemon??
Dan pas bagian perang itu, di sekitar situ kan banyak orang (06:41) kok nggak dibantuin? Kok nggak denger ada keributan diluar?
Yah, kalau kru film beneran emang bisa ngusir mereka sebentar sih, tapi ini 'kan holiday project.... Sudahlah, Alice, nggak usah mendetail..... - -
Tim make up! *ada nggak?* itu pas jatuh kasih efek dong. Apa kek, luka kek, merah-merah....
Sixth, pas 07:17 itu harusnya backsong-nya langsung ilang barengan sama kotoran hitam yang terbang ke arah kamera itu. Dan baru di 07:21, pas gambarnya ada lagi, backsong-nya muncul lagi dengan efek ngagetin gitu. Ohiya, di bagian ini aku prefer ada suara langkah kaki mereka pas lari di daun-daun. Dan sekali-sekali kalau bikin dengan tema yang sama, kameramennnya ikutan lari bareng mereka dong. Atau videonya diambil dari depan. Biar ada variasi dan ekspresi mereka kelihatan :)
Di 07:39, harusnya si cowok liat ke arah si cewek dong. Masa jalan susah gitu temennya dibiarin dibelakang? Cewek lagi.
Dan di 07:46 berhentinya terlalu tiba-tiba. Haru jadi kayak "ah, ini kan pas scene capek itu!" jadi dia berhenti. Jadi kayak dipaksa! Harusnya si cewek berhenti agak jauhan di belakangnya gitu. Secara, dia cewek, jadi fisiknya nggak lebih kuat dari si cowok kan? Apalagi udah lari-lari sepanjang itu.
Oh, wakarimasu. Jaraknya deket biar pas ketembak si cowok bisa langsung nangkep si cewek 'kan? Bisa aja dibuat si cowok lari kebelakang gitu, biar lebih dramatis *apane* tapi kalau adegan kayak gitu harus latian biar timing jatuhnya pas. Jadi nggak jatuh ke tanah.
Dan pas si pemburu dateng, si cowok itu kan nembak tuh (07:57) Dapet darimana men?? Sudah ada dari awal? Kenapa nggak dipake buat nembak daritadi aja? Jadi dua pendekar sakti itu nggak perlu mati 'kan? Lalu kemana perginya pistol itu? Nggak ada scene si cowok ngebuang pistolnya. Mau dimasukin saku? Apa nggak panas...?
Oh, ternyata ada adegannya ding. Tapi ngelihatnya kudu jelas.... Jadi sebaiknya scene itu diambil dari angle tertentu jadi pas adegan buang pistolnya kelihatan :)
Waktu si cewek habis ketembak, dia nggak kelihatan kesakitan atau apalah. Dan kelihatan kayak dibimbing jalan, bukannya dibantuin jalan. Dan kesannya disuruh berbaring, bukan 'dipersilahkan' berbaring.
Lalu pas scene 08:07, si cowok megang kedua bahunya si cewek. Apa nggak sakit ya? 'kan habis ketembak? Atau ketembaknya bukan di bahu? Di lengan? Entahlah.
Dan Haru sempat ngelirik ke kamera pas 08:15.
Dan jarak mereka berdua terlalu dekat. Maksudku, ada scene si cewek nggenggam tangan si cowok kan? Dia sampai ngangkat tangannya gitu. Itu agak mengganjal menurutku....
Di 08:30, si cewek nggak nggenggam betul tangan cowknya - - Chemistry diantara kalian berdua kurang ah...
Dan bunga itu perumpamaan si cewek mati *eh* ya? Keren XD
Pas si cewek udah mati... Dan cowoknya frustasi... Kenapa nggak diperlihatkan ekspresi wajahnya...? Frustasinya kurang ah...
Pemikiran video flashback itu bagus! XD
Dan pemilihan backsong untuk ending bagus :)
Dan review saya berakhir! Gyaaah! Gyaaah!
Maafkan kalau bahasa saya kurang berkenan di hati anda semuaaaa!!
Aku tahu dan sangat mengerti kalau buat film itu susah, aku cuma review.... Jangan marah, jaaaaaa??
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Last, thank you for u'r attention...~
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+ posted on 20130210 at 13:28
